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for A punch with unexpected consequences

by Yppolita

person marcia
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is much better. It explains her logic (or lack of depending on your view) about the situation. I can't stand the fics that just have them jump into the sack and there's no rhyme or reason to it. Though I wouldn't mind getting a chapter about his logic now, to know what he's thinking. As you had her say she thought he was honoarable and now his actions prove differently.
person Anon
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah poor Hermione she hasn't a clue what shes in for. You wont let Snape do anything completely horrible will you? This has the potential to be totally HAWT.

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schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
person sdemelo
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus has so many choices, whatever will he do? I can definitely not wait to find out! Keep writing!
person Queeny
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot masturbating in classroom scene! Some days.. sigh. I wish I could do that..
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more to see what else Snape does to her.
person marcia
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She seemed to accept what was happening rather quickly. I would have exepcted a bit of a fight both about him threatening to expel her and her 'punishment'.