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January 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Big fan of Harry/Ginny, and some of this is quite good (and hot!). I’ve criticized some authors for taking too long to build the sexual tension, then fail to provide a good, sexy, pay-off! In this case, there wasn’t enough build up! No downshift from Cho for Harry, no emotional hiccups for Ginny finding out Corner had left her for Cho. Just 1 - Harry gets abused by Umbridge, 2- Cho gets mad, 3- Corner takes advantage, 4- Harry hooks up with Ginny (and marries her!). Pace is half the art of seduction,and to go from what should have been a couple of disappointments, to Harry & Ginny in bed, with almost no emotional transition, is unrealistic, no matter how strong their attraction.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this one, update again. I hope you show the aftermathe of their wedding.
I wish I thought of this one.
I wish I thought of this one.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good keep going with the story please.
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story - I wonder what the family going to say when they find out that Harry and Ginny are married? PLEASE update soon, could you email when you do... it's ranger_daregn@hotmail.co.uk
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man that was hot good start