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I like your second chapter. I thought at first it was going a bit fast, but then i read your note at the end and realised your intention was to have a 3 chapter piece, so cudos to you for making a good transition for only a 3 chapter piece. I hope you will elaborate more on the effects of the spell between Hermione and Severus, since you translated what she had said when she cast the spell. I assume from that translation, that she would feel what he felt....? And if she did, did she feel what Severus went through when he was being beaten?

Do continue, it's quite good.

Wolfsoul

Very nice. I love that there was no questioning on either part 'I'm a Professor / I'm a Stdent - it shouldn't happen' - gets a bit tedious cos you so know they will be at it at some point. Way to go for getting them there quickly! Loving this, hope there's more to , ahem, come.... lol

this story is so different. i've never read anything like it! i love it! please update soon!

:O Wow..just wow. The spell that Hermione had cast in the first chapter was very sensual and intriguing in itself, but the way you wrote the second chapter was just phenomenal!! The language the way he grabs her and gaaaa that was just brilliant! Pleasepleaseplease update soon this is amazing stuff!

Wow! This is so good! Loved the last scene, very intense. Great descriptions, my heart was pounding! With the second chapter, my heart was pounding even more! Can't wait to read the third one. Are you sure there will be only three chapters? I can see a great story in there.

I love it so far, it starts very good! I'm dying to know what it that spell...

Well, I am intrigued. I would like to read more of this. Where are you taking it?

oh what a begining!!!

Hi Justifiedmedea,
woaw this chapter was absolutly stunning.The idea of a magically woven net of protection for the one you love is simply...genious.I cannot wait to read more about Snape's reaction.Does he know about this kind of magic?How will he react to it?(((H)))Sureves Epans

A very interesting first chapter, I look forward to read more so update again soon!!!