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for The Weaving

by Jmedea

person Fox
schedule January 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 3.

Very dramatic. Very fast and surpising as well. I hope she will be fine.

Fox

 

person Fox
schedule January 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 4.

Lovely. He was perfect and their lovemaking so slow and soothing, healing and organic. Nice.

Fox

person Fox
schedule January 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 5.

Nice endind. The story was lovely and original... if a little brief... I wouldn't mind it being a little longer, but I'm glad you managed to fiish it. Congratulations ;-)

Fox

person Fox
schedule October 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 1&2.

I love it. Very mysterious beginning and very sexy lovemaking :-)

I'm off to read some more.

Fox

schedule July 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I didn't get to read it (and wait lol) the first time around, so I thank you for posting it all. It was lovely, loving, and delicious! Thank you, HG4eva

person Anon
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, now that was heartbreaking! Not even Crying Cinderella does cliffhangers that evil! We need an update? Live or dead? Happy ending or eternal angst? c'mon!
person nastygrl
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I am so happy you've added chapter 3! Now we know what the magic was for, but how will it all end? I'm hoping for a happy ending, of course. I can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for updating!
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an absolutely beautiful story! Not only was the plot wonderful (Severus deserves someone who loves him unconditionally as Hermione does), your excellent writing makes the plot even better!
I am glad that there will be a fourth part to this story, I kling to the hope that you will make Hermione come back to Severus, only a happy ending can make this story even more wonderful:-))
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved it!!! So tender and conflicting. You simply must continue, should the muse dictate!
I'd love to see what happens should she wake up. I'm a real sucker for happy endings.

Well done to you and thanks for a really great story.

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