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May 31, 2022 at 12:00 AM
thank you for sharing a delightful story.
I appreciated that you made both of the principal characters fully faithful to each other.
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is a lot of fun. I enjoy good sexy, fun stories and this one hits on all counts. Thanks for writing. W.
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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww,that was sweet. I loved how all the other girls kept trying to get at Harry in their differant ways. And what a strong teenage boy to turn down a naked girl in his bed, and Marietta right up in his personal space wanting to give him everything. That is some seriously strong will power. I also liked that you didn't have them have sex, that they would wait until they are married. So many fics here have them off boning everything in sight and this was very nicely done.
Cute message too.
Cute message too.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story :) i like it :)
will they wed while they are still in hogwarts? :)
btw. i hope you will find some time to continue your triangle disease story too :)
will they wed while they are still in hogwarts? :)
btw. i hope you will find some time to continue your triangle disease story too :)
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My first comment actually has nothing to do with the fic! I just have to say that I love the word knickers! I'm a Brit, and reading American smut where the women wear panties is one of those things that narks me a bit. Knickers is a much better, and more amusing word! lol!
KNICKERS!
Riiiiiiight, back to something more meaningful...
This fic was brilliant, but in places was a little jumpy and disjointed; the plot was well conceived, portrayed brilliantly and utterly original. I'm not so uppity as you on the Harry/Ginny dynamic; but I do tend to get on my high horse with the Hermione/Ron relationship - I can't imagine that lasting more than a week. However, pairing Harry with Hermione is a relationship that works well - as you and so many others prove in fanfiction.
This was a pleasure to read! And brought me back to the days of school regulation knickers! lol! I used to HATE P.E. days - gym knickers were awful! lol.
11/10 for this piece!
KNICKERS!
Riiiiiiight, back to something more meaningful...
This fic was brilliant, but in places was a little jumpy and disjointed; the plot was well conceived, portrayed brilliantly and utterly original. I'm not so uppity as you on the Harry/Ginny dynamic; but I do tend to get on my high horse with the Hermione/Ron relationship - I can't imagine that lasting more than a week. However, pairing Harry with Hermione is a relationship that works well - as you and so many others prove in fanfiction.
This was a pleasure to read! And brought me back to the days of school regulation knickers! lol! I used to HATE P.E. days - gym knickers were awful! lol.
11/10 for this piece!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi...I remembered reading this when I was only a few paragraphs into it. I re-read it anyway and decided that it was just as good the second time as the first. On to read Knickers II. Oh, btw, I sent an email to Portkey. I don't know if it will help, but I tried. :-)