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by Rettavex

schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 6? Wow...Draco is just as tough as Harry in some ways. I LOVE that...just because Harry is the dominant one doesn't mean Draco has to be a whiny bitch and you've shown him to be quite resilient and manly. Thanks for that. I think Harry had that slap coming to him and I'm so glad that they followed it up with tenderness. I hate the though of Harry killing as well, but hey, you gotta do what you gotta do. I'm really really enjoying this story, it's very engaging not just for the characters, but for the character development, relationship nuances, and the plot. Brilliant really. And sex is coming up next? Will it include those famous words that I can't get out of my head, the words that brought me to read this story? I'm so excited :)))
person nastygrl
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I loved this chapter! Draco willing to sacrifice his own happiness for Harry; he's very noble, but dumb, lol. Harry loves him! Stupid men :D

Thanks for a great chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more!
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 4. Oh no!! Someone is in the mix and it sounds like everyone's in danger. I love how you've assembled Harry's team and that they're all bad asses! lol. Awesome. I LOVE your description of Ron, just like I always pictured him growing up..YUMMY : ) And Harry of course sounds like a God...in fact this whole set up sounded like the Knights of the Round Table. Poor kid, I hope hes not dead. Smart thing, Harry's secret house...too bad he has to keep it a secret from his man. I wonder if there's any truth to this Ginny lead and if Draco is in danger. This is really intriguing...off to read the next bit : )
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 3. Oh no!! I don't like Harry going off on mysterious assignments, especially with the way people are prying into his life right now. I hope there's nothing foul going on that's calling him away. I love their interactions and how well Draco knows his game to know when he's off of it. I love your Harry, bar none, he's one of the sexiest in fan fiction. He's so....rawr...manly and stuff. lol. OK, off to read chapter four. Plushie Draco :)
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, so I'm actually on Ch. 3...but it's the 4th part. lol. Anyway, wow, so there is something more sinister behind the digs into Harry's private life, and whoa what a reason! This is some really deep spy/political game shit going down. I love it!! And I can totally Harry in this sort of role and the consequences that could befall someone like him in that role. This is such an intriguing and plausible plot. I wonder if Blaise was trying not to rile Draco up too much by retracting the kill statement about Class 5 Aurors. It seems like what he said at first was more truthful. Is Harry a killer? I wonder...I'm sure it's for good reasons : ) On him that's damned sexy. I like how you described Blaise a lot and I'm glad that Draco has someone to call on...and thank goodness he did...I wonder how they will proceed now. Harry has to be careful..and I suspect Draco may be at risk as well. Very interesting developments...loving it!
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 1. HAD to start reading this properly....Emily has given me THE quote of a century from this fic, so my interest is piqued. I love Harry and Draco's twisted little relationship. Very very interesting set up....and it's already brimming with eroticism and power. I love your description of Harry and how this relationship meets their respective needs. lol@Ginny discovering them that way....I can't wait to see where you take this...
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 2. Oh, my goodness....how did I miss this. This is bloody brilliant. I love they way you're writing them. It's so real yet dreamy and unconventional but not unplausible. Fantastic. I love how deeply you're delving into their motivations and feelings and how the little rules they have really mean so much to each of them in different way but at the same time they share the same understanding. it's really complex and wonderfully human. I'm curious about the bigger plot to dig into Harry past. Can't wait to see what that's all about. I'm making this my new bedtime story. : ) Can't wait to read more tomorrow night :) Really awesome story here Ret.
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This makes me sniffle in happiness. ^^ I really like how Harry handled everything, from recognizing, to how he got the information out of Draco, and to consoling him as well as himself. Awesome chapter. I'm not sure what else to say.
person christis
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
***sighs and fans self*** wowzer! this is a wonderful story...so glad to see an update...can't wait to read more...take care and have a very Happy Holidays :-)
person qwerty
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! An update!
This story is really intriguing. It was kinda sexy how Harry pulled the Auror act on Draco to question him.
Is Harry going to go to Max to give him a piece of his mind?
Keep writing!