rate_review Reviews

I only just finished chapter six and I am going to continue reading, but I just wanted to say that I really like your use of things that many would be quick to classify as "muggle" into the story. Such as the use of pot (and even then how you used a slight variation) as well as battle forms. I find it interesting because so many authors completely forget that there is another world and that especially after a highly prolific war that it would be possible to keep them COMPLETELY seperate. I love seeing different things, like takes on magical technology, or wizarding customs, or (in this case) muggle integration,etc. things that keep it interesting. Anywho, I'm off to finish what you have written =).

I'm glad this fic is still going. I really do like it. So much intrigue. Keep it up!

@Ch. 10. ooooo. Harry's kinda scary! One look? And it's done huh? Damn, he's a badass in this fic. I LOVE it. So sad Syl didn't make it. I wonder what you meant by the last line, does it mean that he doesn't think he'll survive or he doesn't care about winning, just vengeance? I'm kinda worried now. I love how everyone knows how dangerous Harry can be....Thanks again for showing how smart Ron is...I love that Harry draws on Draco's skills as well. Also, I love your use of little things from the books, it really feels like an extension of the potter books...with slash of course : )

Sooo need chapter 14!!! Will they find out any information? Soooo need more!

@Ch. 9. This story is amazing. The detail and attention to dialogue and how it conveys emotions as well as the descriptions of their facial expressions and interaction overall just puts me right there. I love that Harry wants something exclusive with his Little Dragon, and how Draco isn't some desperate little pansy all love struck to the point where he isn't level headed and still very much a Malfoy who demands full attention. It makes what they have all the more powerful. I hope that Harry still wants Dray after he "thinks on it" and comes back from seeing Syl. And wow...the way Harry plans on healing him? Damn...I'm so jealous of Draco!

Sooo need chapter 13!!!

@Ch. 8. I need a cigarette. YOWZA!! That had to be one of the hottest sex scenes I've ever read. Even if Harry hadn't said a word.... Both Draco and Harry remain so freaking masculine and sexy no matter whos topping or bottoming. How do you manage to write a sex scene without reducing it to something crass? It's so visceral, passionate, and intimate and hardcore yet eloquently written... It's amazing really. And those words...those words Harry whispered to Draco... just priceless. I wish they could stay in the shower forever shagging like this, safe from harm or scandal. I hope you don't hurt either one of them, they need to stay whole so they can go back and do this scene again! I made sure this was the last story I read tonight...cause I knew the sex scene was coming up and it was going to be off the hook, and you did not disappoint! I'm gonna have some wicked nasty dreams tonight, thanks: )

Oh yay! I am so glad to see this being updated here!

@Ch. 5. OMFG!!! This chapter was absolutely gripping, well, they all are, but this one especially. I love how Draco tried to keep himself busy from worry, he's so cute!! And then that situation with Ron was intense. Your Harry is just....FUCK. I LOVE LOVE your Harry in every fic but I think this is my favorite Harry from you.....He's so magnificently powerful and dominant. This chapter revealed him to be a little nutty too, which is sexy as long as its kept in check and he's capable of love. I think Draco liked that shit a little. tee-hee...seriously though, that was slightly abusive, and him being jealous about Ron was like deranged considering his history with both men. But oh nooooos. I hope Syl isn't dead. I fear Harry's response to that....really great writing!

@ch. 6. Whoa, for a minute there, I thought someone was going to get seriously hurt. Poor thing, Syl...that sounds horrible. And now Harry's going to blame himself, that's a given. I sense some challenges coming to his and Draco's relationship. The image of mad cackling Harry akin to Bellatrix was really frightening...I hope when he awakes he's more like himself, then again something tells me he's going to to be in full attack mode when he awakes. Oh nos