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OMFG!!! That was the most intense, and HOTTEST Drarry sex scene ever. It rivaled the bathroom scene. OMG, I LOVE it when Harry gets like that with Dray and I loved that Draco was just as passionate and fierce in the fight as Harry only to succumb to his lust. That was just a crazy fight. I'm glad they got it out of their system though because it seems like now Harry needs all the allies he can get. I'm afraid about this new threat...which is probably the reason all of these other things have been happening to Harry right? I like that Max and Blaise are both helping them and they have like their own unofficial team going. This is just getting more intense and intriguing, if that were possible. You have to update soon!

Ch. 13. OMG. This is like better than Mission Impossible. I love how kickass everyone is. The sexual tension and sparks between Charlie and Emma are HOT!! Drarry who? LOL. Now what's that all about? What's going on with Charlie, is there a larger subplot brewing? I love the way you craft new ideas/spells/places. This thing that happened to Syl sounds really deadly, and Harry knows what it is? And it involves Max. Uh Oh, I smell trouble! Excellent chapter...very exciting and I love Emma lots!

Oh! Awesome chapter! I am dying for the rest of this story!

@Chapter 12. That was so intense! Damn Max. I'm so sad that he was able to get to Dray like that. I love how well Harry can read his lover. That scene where he figured out something was wrong was like jarring, I felt like I was in the moment with Draco. I love how selfless Draco is, and how much he's willing to give up for Harry but I'm SO glad Harry set him straight. They're declarations really are fiercely romantic and beautiful and it's even more hot because they're so masculine you know? : ) I just hope their love isn't put through too much now that they've decided to go all or nothing. I love this fic Rettavex. Your writing is so descriptive and really pulls me in to the room with these characters. Great job....OK, onto the next tomorrow :)

Of course I want to see Chapter 16. ^^ This was a really good chapter. Of course, I should have caught on that Draco had not heard Max, since you said he whispered, and yes, it does make sense for anyone (be it Draco or many others in love) that senses would shut off. The scene following the last...that was absolutely wonderfully written. The pain, frustration...the love there was thrilling and gorgeous. I was so entranced, definitely by the moment that Harry yelled at Draco at last, saying that he was pushed. I was completely moved the moment Harry decided to confess.

And then, back to the world outside...very exciting. To have a sane, professional, and powerful man to contend with. This is really getting interesting. Wonderful job with this chapter.

Sooo need chapter 16!!! Sounds like dangerous times are coming!!!

oh my! this just gets better and better...you've got my blood up now...I can't wait for the next chapter...please update soon and keep up the Awesome work!

That was an epic fight. Very well-written.
Looks like Harry has his work cut out for him. ^^

Did I mention that this story has my heart? Well it does!And Ah, the plot thickenss!!!! Very interesting

Oh yes, definitely. Your scene with Emma and Charlie was indeed beautiful. I really enjoyed the descriptions and assessments of Emma in these past two chapters from both smitten Charlie's and professional Harry's points of view. You've introduced a really hard core (sane!) woman, and I think that is just wonderful. I held on to a cure for Syl for just a moment, so I'm sad to see him go, but I am content to have at least a lead on who his attackers were. That former event when Harry found out is still sticking in my mind as one of the most powerful scenes I've ever read. Max is all kinds of trouble so I'm glad that they've talked it out between the two of them, though if Draco did indeed arrive at the hug, he should have heard Max's words. I don't think I should be at all worried so I won't be, but I do hope that Draco understands quickly enough, though he does have a right to be insecure. Great job with these past two chapters.