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Gripping update....this business with Avery and Come is like a good mystery novel, only I think Avery is gonna prove far more formidable an opponent than the other two. He kinda scares me, especially since his grudge seems to be so personal. I'm so glad Harry caught on and let Kingsley know what was up as well. I hope the develop a plan to get out of this mess and find out who the leak is and I hope this doesn't manage to damage Harry and Draco's relationship. Great update.

And so the plot thickens...
Keep going!

Soooo need chapter 17!!!

holy shit! that was intense. loved it

SHIT!!!! That was...incredible. An internal orgasm? I'm learning stuff too! LOL. I love how you write these two, the sex is just brilliantly written, and the emotions seem so raw and real. You make Harry too fucking hot. I seriously shouldn't have read this at work. I'm hot in the pants now. Thanks! lol. I can't wait to find out what's going on with this shady dude with the hate agenda. I hope nothing bad will happen to either of our men, especially now that they're definitely n'sync with each other completely. Update soon :)

Hello, stranger! Na im kidding=D You basically write the best sex every of all time and i love it! I cant wait for morrreee

CHAP. 17(OR 16!)
hm. i love the tender harry just as much as a dominating harry! the sex was great! U REALLY HAVE A TALENT WITH WRITING STORIES! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CHAPTER! PLEASE PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON!~

**fanning self** Oh my! that was beyond hot...thank you so much...hope you are doing...can't wait for more...take care

[This is linagabriev btw; changed usernames]
Damn! (and swallowed Draco as though he were air) I loved that line. So incredible. You are amazingness. Seriously. This was simply gorgeous, sexy, and completely awe-inducing. To be honest, I've never heard of an internal orgasm before this (just googled it...lol)...but damn.

@14. OH NO!!! Draco does not play...and he was already insecure about Max in the first place. I'm so glad that Harry turned Max down, but DAMN!! I hope they make up quick. I loved the interrogation foreplay with Emma and Harry. She is a bad motherf*cka : ) And wow, the back story with Avery, that was really well done, I do wonder who's managed to string all of these pieces together to try and hurt Harry. I hope they get exposed soon. Squee! I'm almost caught up and so excited about where this is going...off to read the next and only chapter left before you update again : )