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Holy moly! Harry's got major trouble brewing! Sooo need chapter 4!

I like the angle you are taking on the Harry/Draco relationship, and the plot promises to be very interesting.
Thank you!

Hey - keep writing. This is great stuff - you've laid a very nice plot and some great characterization down in four short chapters, and I for one can't wait to see where you take it. Harry and Draco's strengths and weaknesses and the interdependence of their relationship can play so many ways against the political intrigue you set up in chapter four. This HAS to be fun to write. The flow is nice and there are lots of great little details that set the scene up well. Draco and Harry in the bath were lovely, and Draco and Blaise's ease with each other in this chapter was a nice touch. I loved "Little Lucius" and Narcissa with a house elf as the only drama befitting Blaise being "summoned like a butler." Good stuff! Don't be down hearted about the lack of reviews; there's so much erm, rubbish to wade through here to get to the readable ones that it takes time to build an audience. Good luck, and most of all, have fun with it.

Enjoying it so far- well written with just the right hint of suspense.
looking forward to future chapters :)

Sooo need chapter 3!!! As long as that wasn't a kiss goodbye!!! OH I couldn't do it! I'd be a nervous wreck every time he left!