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for A Bunny Tale

by starcrossedkayla

person Jilliane
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Oh! I'm sorry to see this end, but I'm ecstatic to know there will eventually be a sequel. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Your writing is very evocative, so it was easy to imagine Harry as a bunny. I loved your descriptions, of how his ears would droop, or be pointed towards the ceiling, and I loved Harry's childlike guileless-ness, even when he was trying to sneak into Severus' room, or when he told Severus about his "allergy", or when he blithely told Severus about his and the Weasley twins' "plans". Then you balanced it out nicely by having him be possesive and territorial with the house elves, and having him punch Draco (heehee!), reminding us of his more animal instincts. Well done!


I'm eagerly awaiting the further adventures of BunnyHarry! Yay for sequels! Yay for great writing! Yay for Starcrossed!

person Rosei
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Oh yes!!! The best!!! So sweet and loving!!!
Love quirky Severus hexing all the students and the
loving coney's ways!!!

Thank you and don't eat too many hot crossed buns!!!

R
person Rosei
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3

So much to love about chapter three!!!

Fine humor balanced out with misunderstanding
and tenderness. The slap on the hand of this gentle
coney and the resulting tender moment in bed was so
sweet!!! Wow!!!

Thanks for the Easter Coney story!!!
R
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cute, poor potter, hes always a bit of a freak.
I know what a coney is, duh, brace of coneys, lotr, Sam....wanted to eat them...ill never see that scene the same way again.
kylee.
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, it just keeps getting better. Harry is just adorable as a little bunny.
person LilCas
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!! It Is very Cute!!!! Keep at It!!!!!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! Harry no matter what is gonna find trouble, it's a shame that Sev didn't believe him, I wonder if that comes back to bite him.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I'm more fond of this story than I thought I'd be. Still. Hehe...

I love Harry harassing the house elves. Poor little guy, though. Being called a liar.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story please update soon. The idea of this story is very unique and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
person alma
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.