rate_review Reviews

Nice.. very very gruesome but nice.. and at the same time no one will think Harry did the crime now.. that is evil.

So far so great! More please! I love dark Harry! Let's torture some Weasleys now, hehehehe...oh sorry, as I was saying, great story, more please. Thank you. The ramblings of a mad woman.

Are you going to update the actual story soon? I mean, the poems are interesting, but I have been waiting for the next chapter to be updated. I really do enjoy this story, thought I must say that the plot is a bit rushed. I'm not trying to flame you, I think you are a great author, but you could slow down the plot a bit or explain how things came about between Voldemort and Harry and why Harry decided to kills his 'family'. I think this story has a lot of promise, but I would like you to update the story, and not these poems. Please add the next chapter soon. I like how Bella was afraid of Harry, but then when she went to see what Harry did, she wasn't afraid anymore, and that doesn't make that much sense to me, but I will go with it if you explain it later on in the story.

I almost bypassed this story because of the grammatical errorsin the summary. I'm not going to lie- they irk me like no other. I'm glad I didn't though because it is a good piece. Are things deliberately un-capitalized or are you in need of a beta? If you are looking for a beta, keep me in mind (thelostpetunia@yahoo.com) because I'm torn, trully. I want to keep reading your story, but your grammar trips me up and annoys me so. Update soon, so I can see which side of my internal battle will win out.
~Unbloomed

more please...

At first, I didn't think I would like it, but as I read on, I got interested. ^^
Please keep writing! Update soon! ^^;

Great start...is there more?
I like to see/read where you go with this.

I love it! Please Post more!

i read dark star cyan's story. i love ur story too, will their be a ron/hermoine bashing?

This is really interesting...update soon please...