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Please Please up date soon.

Thank you

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Update soon!

Wow, I love the poem you put up. Did you write it? If you did, It's grate (and you should think of putting it up on DeventArt.) Even if you didn't it's still good. I'm keeping the poem, just so you know. I won

Up-date up-date up-date x infinity!!!!! Sorry didn't mean to yell but do you think you could maybe possibly sorta up-date like soon maybe sooner. Thank you.

sick and twisted .. . and i like it! looking forward to the back story and what happens next!

please add me to your email update list: pwfan626@aol.com.

Goddamnit hurry up with the next chapter already!! -pout-, i love this story, its morbidly hilarious, but com'on! feed your readers!

YAY!!! I've been waiting for this new chapter for ages (and only just realised that it had gone up since ive been without a computer). To tell you the truth posting those poems (as good as they are) really irritated me some. Anyhow, I enjoyed this chapter, a little short though, try expanding things a little more and adding more detail, don't be afraid to write long chapters as long as they aint uber long. The first chapter was average length and included detail like I was saying but this one, as good as it was, was a little bit of a let down from the standard that you set yourself at in the first chapter (which was wonderful by the way, especially Bella's reaction to the murders). Anyway, keep smiling (and writing of course) and don't worry about how bad you think your writing is because once you improve length of chapters and detail included you will be well on your way to being one of my top fanfic writers. If you're really worried about how your writing is and don't have a beta to read over it then send me an email and i'd gladly help out. I'm on the computer every second day at least (usually every day) and could use something else to do.

On a different note; are you able to email me when you update so that I know when the chapters have been posted? gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com

damn right, you deserve to be flamed -sticks tongue out at you-, dont do it again. AWESOME CHAPTER!!!! hurry up with the next...

whoa, talk about dark! im always surprised that there aren't more fics where harry unleashes a can of whop ass on the dursleys. those are the most fun to read, imo and very catharic to write i would imagine. email me when you update: pwfan626@aol.com. read ya later!

Ekk! YOu finally posted again !! I am sooo excited!!! More please!!! I love insane bella!!!