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for Heart And Soul

by Tassanaburrfoot

schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved these 2 chapters, although u have got me worried about the last line of chapter 5...update soon hun x
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I should have reviewed before now cos i am totally loving this fic. It's good how you are taking it slow and I can't believe people are moaning about lack of sex. while smut is awesome(!) I love to read dramione stories about the slow build of their relationship especially with two such volatile people as Hermione and Draco. So you carry on with what you're doing cos I love it.

That chapter with the party was so good - those kisses where everything fades away are heaven and then Draco revealing his love for her. It's kinda bittersweet cos you know everyone will be against them but I hope they can enjoy their time together before they go back.

Please update soon!
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I just hope it all works out in the end....
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay this chapter made me laugh. Their petty arguing isn't going to keep covering for their attraction for one anther for much longer. But it's still funny that they're trying so hard to deny it. Anyway, great update, I can't wait to read more!
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gads....I can just see Malfoy with three-colour-tacky-as-always bowling shoes and a flourescent orange *snigger* bowling ball.....Slytherin Cool just can't compete with that! beautifully rendered.
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAOOOOO i loved this chapter...and the smoochies :D
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keeps getting better! nice long chapyter, love the way you described the kiss and the mixed up feelings!! update soon!!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update again soon
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco Malfoy bowling? this should be interesting!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a cute story. I can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you update again soon!