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by jar

schedule March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
it ends too suddenly, but I liked it
person kunitsu
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Th-that was it, the ending was kinda sudden. It felt like a cliffy, will you write a sequel to this?
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH! I love this! Very good all throughout and I love the end!
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats how you end it!? are you freakin kidin me!?! it was too good to end lke that!! what happened?!?! Sequel!!!
person kunitsu
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh nice, now Harry know what the Ministry has done to Severus I am sure he will retaliate and defend Severus. Cant wait for the next chapter
person kunitsu
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kinda find it sweet of Severus that he did that for Harry. Will you reveal who attacked Severus or will they stay annonymous
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a brilliant story! It is positively ingenius. Can't wait for the updates.
person kunitsu
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just noticed that most of their conversations are somewhat awkward but they still manage and what an interesting end to the third chapter. I am kinda confused at some parts of this but I am looking forward to seeing how this goes
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice i like how u have portrayed the characters :)
person kunitsu
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Confusing but very interesting, update soon