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Oh no, Poor Tobias. It wasn't quite the reaction I would have expected from abaxus about James and Draca. I would have expected him to threaten James or something. But then again he isn't as much as I brat as he was in the first story anymore. But it is his only sister. I am wondering what poor Severus is going to do with Tobias, and how Tobias will stand Voldemont. It will be interesting to read the next chapter. I figured Voldemont will try with all his mite to get what the future holds out of the poor boy. I can't wait to read the next chapter. The lockets the key home right? It would make sense that it could take them home.
anyway, don't tell me, let me be surprised. I always like being surprised.

Thanks for writing
Dawnangel

Very interesting story...I look forward to reading more.

ahh, cliffie! Poor Abraxas getting beat up so much. Such pride the young man has, guess that goes hand in hand with being a Malfoy though. I will wait patiently for an explanation. Besides I don't have my copy of Deathly Hollows anyways. I am greatly enjoying this fic though. I can't wait for more. I can't wait for Draca's response to what they did do her brother, I can see some retaliation coming. Anyways, I await your next update.

Dawnangel

YAY. A kiss how sweet. The star couple finally gets together. That was almost the same exact reaction to that little stunt of James' as I thought Snape would have. I am curious as to what Lucius will do about Draca, and how Tobias meeting with the "He-who-was-never-hugged-as-a-child" (great name by the way.) will go. I am still curious as to how Draca's brother went back in time. Did the locket have a locater spell, or something on it? Will the memories of those whom they are impacted change, or will the have to wipe the plate clean before they leave for the future again. All this time travel make me head spin in two directions at the same time in different time-space continuum's. I can see James taking their memories about it, otherwise wouldn't those whom they are with right now, have remember what had happened the minute they had landed. sorry that was sorta a little out-loud pondering about time travel, one of those circular logic things that no one will ever know.
you are doing a great job, and i enjoyed the ending of "You Raise Me Up" Very good.

Thanks for writing,
Dawnangel

lolol. Big brother didn't want to them to have ALL the fun. Oh knows, what will happen now. And poor Tobias so lost and Scared. How was it that the hair clip pulled him back? Didn't James do the time-traveling himself, or is something darker at play here. Hhuhm.. anyways lovely chapter, and i look forward to more as always.

Not complaining at all. It was nicely done. Where did you get that curse. "Voldamont's Nipple No", that was hilarious. Poor Severus, and poor Tobias having to go with Snape to the dark lord. Draca is certainly very bold. Sirius is going to get himself into trouble. i am enjoying this story. Can't wait for more. I wonder how Tobias will react to seeing his dad, and the dark lord. Tobias knows he is a spy, and it was an evil time, but he probably never seen it with his own eyes. it will be an interesting reaction, especially if it was a revel or something.

Dawnangel

That was definitely interesting. I can't say I saw a full blown duel going down. Hehe, Lime green. Sirius plays mean, no fair. I do love your stories, they are very good. I like your other story, You Raise Me up, i saw the little girl coming though, it was funny, lucius' reaction. please keep writing. i like Tobias, he is a very round character. I can't wait for more.

Nice prank, Hot pink? good choice. Interesting reaction the the prank from Sirius though, you'd think he would have been more manly about the such wonderful color. Are we going to see a great prank war start. Will Sirius enact revenge? I like finally seeing some character development in Tobias. Very interesting character. I lot like is father. Nice job, I am looking forward to reading the rest.

ahh, poor Draca, and Sirius's naked glory. I do wonder though why he wouldn't like towels. Would it be because of the time he spent as a dog, and dogs don't like towels. or is it just one of those quirks. James is certainly a protective creature, and its nice to see some more of James' dragon attributes. I like the description of his back, and ridgeline. I wonder if that would be a very sensitive area, like an erogenous zone for him? Nice Job, I am looking forward to reading more of it.

Dawnangel

I loved the scene between Moody, and Draca. Made me crack up laughing, which hurts cause I just got my wisdom teeth out, but I need some laughs. Draca's little snit about the eyeball was just genius, i love it. You have a great story here. I love the dynamics you have going on between Snape and Tobias. Poor cats. I can't wait to see what other mischief they get in to at hogwarts. When do we get to see more Harry. i can't wait to read more, i really like this story.

Dawnangel