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for Thinking of You

by Dayna

person Anon
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person neelix
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice..very sexy stuff!!

Thanks for taking this further... it needed it and made it perfect.


neelix
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit that was excellent!!! I loved your descriptions! V. Hot.
I'd love to read more of your work. I hope the plot bunnies find you
XXX
person wicraven
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you can't bloody leave it at that! God! that was hot. Keep going. You need to keep going. It's good!
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was... I mean you... I just... You...


Tease!

Shiloh
person Tenar10r
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the 'my room'; "My room" lines.
person carha
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay I'm so glad you decided to continue this story. It has so much potential. Please update soon.