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Oh, I'm SO glad this wasn't the end of the story! I'm really enjoying this one, just as much as I am your other one, "Fire Call", which is absolutely brilliant. I'm so happy there's lots more of this one. The song in this one has always been a favourite of mine, and reminded me of another Phil Collins favourite, "One More Night", which I just had to go listen to. That would have been good for this too. This is such a great story. Your writing is just fantastic and I just can't wait for more. Thanks for letting us know there's lots more to look forward to.

Oh I'm really glad you're enjoying them! And thank you for reviewing often too, it really does make my day, I love to hear people's opinions on the stories :)

Oooh, and the plot thickens! Great stuff, and I can't wait to see what Harry has in mind for Severus. You're doing a really good job at building the intensity and anticipation between these two, and this has great humour to it. I love Severus' reaction to the fanfiction about himself, especially how he takes his small pleasure in being referred to as handsome and sexy. Thanks for another great chapter, and for how fantasically fast you've been updating, which of course only whets my appetite for MORE!

Wow, that was a fast update!

And..oh!....(Chapter 5) the end brought a tear to my eye...that song....*sniff* Well done!


But...please, PLEASE say this wasn't the end of the story?!?!?! MORE please!!!

Hi there! Glad you're enjoying the story; no this most certainly isn't the end; there are sixteen chapters in total and I'm uploading them as often as I have the time :) Should be about a chapter a day :)

Oh these two! LOL! They're going to explode if they don't take care of this! Good stuff!

Oh, I am LOVING this story!!


Now that they've got each other jealous as hell, can't wait to see what else they do about it.

Great chapter! MORE please, and soon, please!

I love this dance between them

Oh...a bit of a cliffhanger there, sort of. Will Harry be able to talk Severus around? Will he enjoy it if he does? Can't wait to find out! More please!!

Oh! I'm SO enjoying your other story, "Fire Call" that I was thrilled to see you've put up another one! I'm liking this one very much as well, with all the cat and mousing Severus is doing with Harry. Please update soon! Can't wait to read more!