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awwwwwww!!!!!!! it was so cute! loved it!!! *cries*

awwwwwww!!!!!!! it was so cute! loved it!!! *cries*

Amazing story. I am speechless. I dont know why I hadn't read it before, but this story is just beyond words. The last thing Severus says made me cry. That's so touching! I hope you come out with the sequel really soon. I love it! Thanks!

Wow!!!!! 5 chapters at once!! The only bad thing about that is that it's the end of the story!! Waaah!

I have to say, if Draco must be in the story, it couldn't have been done any better than you did it. I was absolutely howling with laughter at some of the lines, particularly "I think you'd lie down like the good little Slytherin you are and beg me to fuck you." That was a good one, as was the scene where Severus took the drunken and gassy Draco back to Malfoy Manor. I was rolling helplessly on the floor with that one! It was awesome!! This is what I adore about this story and "Fire Call", the humourous bits are excellent. You really have a talent for writing funny stuff. I also liked the description of the "Spitting Serpent" drink, it was very imaginative. I'm not really crazy about fics that turn Harry into a snivelling twit, turning the waterworks on at every opportunity, but you didn't do that, even though Harry did cry quite a bit. You made him sensitive and caring, not a whinging sissy; he cried at the thought of losing that which meant the most, which is what makes all the difference. And, of course, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Awwww! This story was wonderful. It had a little bit of everything; it was sweet, screamingly funny in places, there was a little mystery and intrigue, some sad moments, love, hate, jealousy, and the happy ending I love to see. Well done, Flic! I loved it all and in my humble opinion, YES PLEASE to a sequel!! Yay, Flic!

*off to read the update to Fire Call*

GRRRR! I had written you a nice review for this chapter (9), and then AFF went to it's daily down time and it didn't post!

Okay, so....I can't really say I was happy to see Draco put in an appearance as I'm not fond of him, but that's just a personal observation, not a flame or criticism, so please don't take it that way! I am, however, a fan of Lucius and his Malfoy nastiness, and I'm deeply intrigued by this latest development with Severus getting sick and the memories he's had of him. Makes me wonder if it's a deep psychological issue, perhaps Lucius used Severus' love to torture him, or maybe he's simply cursed him in some way......the plot thickens even more! Can't wait to see how this develops, and if Severus will ever get past what it is that makes him think he's unworthy of Harry and/or love.

Thanks so much for updating so fantastically fast and keeping my voracious appetite for this story fed! Yay Flic!!

(btw....any chance you'll be updating "Fire Call" soon?)

Hey Jilliane! First off, let me just say I'm not a big fan of Draco either, so don't worry too much, and secondly I am posting part five of Fire Call right now xx

Oh, these two chuckleheads...

I love this. Even when they finally get to the sex, there's nothing but trouble.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You're killing me!!!!!!!! You can't leave it there!! Oh hurry, HURRY please and update!!

*gets grip on self*


Wow! This chapter was beautiful....all the way until the end! I thought Severus was finally admitting to himself all he felt for Harry. He was so sweet and caring while they were in bed, moving slowly, aware it was Harry's first time....and then...OH!! Poor Harry, wounded again. Poor Severus, so clueless!

That said, I'm a total sucker for angst, and the ending of this was wrenching. I love it and can't bear it at the same time!!

Please, PLEASE hurry with an update!

Oh poor Severus!! Harry was cruel, but I'm glad to see they made it up. I can't wait to see what Severus will answer to Harry's "Yes. Is that okay?" Kind of a cliffie!! Dying for the next update! Well done!