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for Lost Hope

by Isebas1

person Dragen
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start to the story, but not as good as The Power of Past Lives, that seems to be better then this one.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please...
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whats with the Inu Yasha refrence? It seems a bit random and out of place. :/


person ecorate
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no idea what i think yet. update soon
person kjp
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start update soon
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very good start. Many interestingly done scenarios like:
- Harry suffering was short
- Harry accepted fast enogh rather than going on guilt trip and denying it
- His time spent in demon world was done in short time considering it was 10,000 years
- He got powers logically
- He returned back in the same chapter rather than you spending more time in demon world. Very Good.

Few questions:
- Will Harry be immortal considering he's demon?
- Now that he has that body suit, is he immune to everything? Including Killing curse?
- WIll he stay powerful Harry or will he let others manipulate him (like Dumbles and Molly)?
- Will he, sort of, bond his slaves?
- Will there be alpha? I hope you do and it's Tonks. Bring out her dark side too and make her immortal along with Harry.


Very good start. Please update soon
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can hermione be one of harry's slaves