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by Ms_Figg

person Confused
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you're confused about what Consort means. I've noticed over the course of several of your fics you seem to have it mean courtesan. Consort means Spouse. So Vashti telling Victor she needs a king not a husband is a bit confusing.
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Confused: Don't be confused. There are several definitions for consort. I use the one that means "companion or partner." Not spouse.

1.A husband or wife, especially the spouse of a monarch.
2.A companion or partner.
3.A ship accompanying another in travel.
4.Partnership; association: governed in consort with her advisers.
5.A group; a company: a consort of fellow diplomats.
6.Music.
a.An instrumental ensemble.
b.An ensemble using instruments of the same family.

It could be "especially the spouse of a monarch" but doesn't have to necessarily be.
person moepi
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story. But you know what really cracked me up ? the seeds...
Cheers moepi aka Mich
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you decided to keep the story Severus/Hermione--I tried reading the re-write, but everything just seemed off, because I already read the story in the Harry Potter universe and the same vampire lore was being used. This is such a wonderful story--you developed your vampire lore and hierarchy quite well, and came up with convincing premises for Hermione and Adam and Severus and the lustful vampires. Besides, all the chicks chasing relentlessly after Severus is pretty darn funny. Plus Hermione's attempts to resist are a hoot. And we all love Adam.
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, i love this story!! such a cliffie! update soon! please!
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
But...but...you left it. And I don't know what happens....GET BACK HERE!! lol This is SUCH a great story! I can't wait for more!
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was an amazing story!! loved it!!!
person kinkyfairy33
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are so evil to leave it there! the tension, everything's been building up to this! update soon!
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have melted into a pile of gooey mush...that was so HOT! Mmmmmmmm....more please! lol Great update, I can't wait for more, I absolutely LOVE this story! Hope you update again soon!
person LJAM
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11....what a sneaky bastard! lol.This is going to prove interesting, and fun. Serverus is going to have to protect the object of his desire. I'm so glad that this is a complete story Ms Figg.