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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i seriously love your story! and thanks for the update!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter twenty-four (again):
i reread the chapter to regain my bearings on the story, though i have actually forgotten what year they're in. oh noes!! i'll have to look back and figure it out, though i think they're third years, right? anyway, i remembered a metaphor i used the first time i tried to review this chapter, but the comment got messed up and it couldn't be seen. it went something like this: poor sirius and remus, both trying to ignore the pink elephant in the room that they think the other can't see. ...actually, i just checked, and that line IS in my review. oh well.
chapter twenty-five:
this is a great story still. i'm sad that rom wants them to stop sharing a bed, i really like that aspect. *sigh* oh well. we'll see what happens. i've been checking for this update multiple times a day! actually, i'd been reading a deathnote fic when my internet closed, so i decided to check for this before going back, and --TADA!!-- an update! i was so happy. i really hope that there's exaggeration and slanted wording in rita's article and it's not mostly the cold, brutal truth. that would hurt remmy. awws. i want rem to be happy. the pictures that sirius painted are awesome too!! can't wait for another update!~
i reread the chapter to regain my bearings on the story, though i have actually forgotten what year they're in. oh noes!! i'll have to look back and figure it out, though i think they're third years, right? anyway, i remembered a metaphor i used the first time i tried to review this chapter, but the comment got messed up and it couldn't be seen. it went something like this: poor sirius and remus, both trying to ignore the pink elephant in the room that they think the other can't see. ...actually, i just checked, and that line IS in my review. oh well.
chapter twenty-five:
this is a great story still. i'm sad that rom wants them to stop sharing a bed, i really like that aspect. *sigh* oh well. we'll see what happens. i've been checking for this update multiple times a day! actually, i'd been reading a deathnote fic when my internet closed, so i decided to check for this before going back, and --TADA!!-- an update! i was so happy. i really hope that there's exaggeration and slanted wording in rita's article and it's not mostly the cold, brutal truth. that would hurt remmy. awws. i want rem to be happy. the pictures that sirius painted are awesome too!! can't wait for another update!~
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love the differences in attitude between Remus and Sirius. The murals of what would be the future Mauraders was great too. ^^ (heh, Sirius is such a worrier.)
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. I wonder what Greyback got him?
I love this story. Can't wait for the next update. ^^ Keep up the great work!
I love this story. Can't wait for the next update. ^^ Keep up the great work!
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i made an actually, literal, physical sound of joy when i realized another chapter had been posted, even though i haven't finished what's up so far.
chapter twenty-two:
iiieeee!! rem gets to go to hogwarts for the school year!! but now... now siri's parents might send him somewhere else... NOOOOOOESSSS!!!! that's so not fair.
chapter twenty-three:
yay for sorta-bonding with siri and reg. they need that sometimes. heehee. reg messed the cake. that was amuzing. i really hope siri gets to go back to hogwarts, he just got too! and james. james, james, james... he's so lovesick. it's annoyingly cute. gag. awwws!! siri misses rem as much as james misses lilly. they so cute. yay for siri having a talk about *gasp* feelings with his uncle!! awwws... sirius is so screwed. for lifes. really. this sucks. /I/ don't hope he starts liking girls suddenly. that would suck.
chapter twenty-four:
yay for the perfect prank!! that's so awesome. <3 they are so sweet, and that was a bloody brilliant idea. yays for remmy getting into gryffindor!! and even though the kids were wary, they seem to be okay-ish. they aren't running away, so that's good. rem and siri are so cute. idiot boys. both expecting the other to say something, and thus thinking the other forgot/didn't mean it that way. stupid boys. stupid, stupid boys. *sigh* i really hope they get over their stupidity soon. yay!!! i really love this story!! they're so cute!! i hope remmy continues to love his classes and do well in them. i'm so glad that they're all good friends now!!
i genuinely love this story. this is a story that will have me checking on it three times a day, and i don't have many of those stories. those that i like enough to continue checking on tend to be forgotten when they aren't updated, but you clearing update this quite often, so i look forward to more and can't wait!!! eeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!~
chapter twenty-two:
iiieeee!! rem gets to go to hogwarts for the school year!! but now... now siri's parents might send him somewhere else... NOOOOOOESSSS!!!! that's so not fair.
chapter twenty-three:
yay for sorta-bonding with siri and reg. they need that sometimes. heehee. reg messed the cake. that was amuzing. i really hope siri gets to go back to hogwarts, he just got too! and james. james, james, james... he's so lovesick. it's annoyingly cute. gag. awwws!! siri misses rem as much as james misses lilly. they so cute. yay for siri having a talk about *gasp* feelings with his uncle!! awwws... sirius is so screwed. for lifes. really. this sucks. /I/ don't hope he starts liking girls suddenly. that would suck.
chapter twenty-four:
yay for the perfect prank!! that's so awesome. <3 they are so sweet, and that was a bloody brilliant idea. yays for remmy getting into gryffindor!! and even though the kids were wary, they seem to be okay-ish. they aren't running away, so that's good. rem and siri are so cute. idiot boys. both expecting the other to say something, and thus thinking the other forgot/didn't mean it that way. stupid boys. stupid, stupid boys. *sigh* i really hope they get over their stupidity soon. yay!!! i really love this story!! they're so cute!! i hope remmy continues to love his classes and do well in them. i'm so glad that they're all good friends now!!
i genuinely love this story. this is a story that will have me checking on it three times a day, and i don't have many of those stories. those that i like enough to continue checking on tend to be forgotten when they aren't updated, but you clearing update this quite often, so i look forward to more and can't wait!!! eeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!~
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...wth? my review got cut off. anyway, to finish the review to 24...
the song was awesome, and they are so squishy. in an emotional type of way. yeah. sorry to be plauging you with reviews, but you're amazing. i don't really remember what all i said, but i remember commenting on the fact that rem and siri are dumb for thinking the other ought to say something first. i'm glad that the kids are semi-okay with rem (he's not been attacked/teased yet). also, i hope rem continues to love his classes and get good marks. and i hope that him and siri TALK about the ELEPHANT in the room that neither of them knows the other can SEE!!! arrg. anyway, great fic, and i can't wait for the next chapter. i'll be constantly checking on it!!~
the song was awesome, and they are so squishy. in an emotional type of way. yeah. sorry to be plauging you with reviews, but you're amazing. i don't really remember what all i said, but i remember commenting on the fact that rem and siri are dumb for thinking the other ought to say something first. i'm glad that the kids are semi-okay with rem (he's not been attacked/teased yet). also, i hope rem continues to love his classes and get good marks. and i hope that him and siri TALK about the ELEPHANT in the room that neither of them knows the other can SEE!!! arrg. anyway, great fic, and i can't wait for the next chapter. i'll be constantly checking on it!!~
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter nineteen:
silly boy. of COURSE dumbledore knows you're there. he knows everything about everyone. *sigh* but yes, at least he does have the sense not to go to dada.
chapter twenty:
i've gotten so engrossed, i can't really find myself with things to comment on. i just want to keep reading.
chapter twenty-one:
DAMBITALL!!!! they were so close, SO! CLOSE!! they were less than an inch away from kissing, and then that A-HOLE spion had to RUIN it!!! GRRRRRRR!!!!!! ...'shit!' that was perfect. yay james. good GRIEF, this is so depressing. i hate this. i mean, i love the story, i just hate what's happening to remus. he's so sweet, and i just LOVE him to pieces. i hope he and siri get a chance soon to talk about what almost happened. *squishynesses* yays.
i should go to bed... but last night i was definately plagued by this story. -_- of course, catching up won't help me any, just leave me with nothing to read. so... i'll leave it at this for now and finish tommorrow.~
silly boy. of COURSE dumbledore knows you're there. he knows everything about everyone. *sigh* but yes, at least he does have the sense not to go to dada.
chapter twenty:
i've gotten so engrossed, i can't really find myself with things to comment on. i just want to keep reading.
chapter twenty-one:
DAMBITALL!!!! they were so close, SO! CLOSE!! they were less than an inch away from kissing, and then that A-HOLE spion had to RUIN it!!! GRRRRRRR!!!!!! ...'shit!' that was perfect. yay james. good GRIEF, this is so depressing. i hate this. i mean, i love the story, i just hate what's happening to remus. he's so sweet, and i just LOVE him to pieces. i hope he and siri get a chance soon to talk about what almost happened. *squishynesses* yays.
i should go to bed... but last night i was definately plagued by this story. -_- of course, catching up won't help me any, just leave me with nothing to read. so... i'll leave it at this for now and finish tommorrow.~
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter two:
yay friends!!! i really liked the letter-format, and i can't wait to read more! so i'll go read more!
chapter three:
they is so cute! i know there's not 'luff' yet, but they're still cute, even as friends. yays!! i think i have time for one more chapter before i need to go to class. so i guess i'll read it!!
chapter four:
dude, rem, siri's gonna get lost in the woods. that's how he found you, remember? by getting lost! how is he ever gonna find his way back alone?
great story, i really love this so much!! i'm so excited by the possibilities! your writing is terrific and the plot is so juicey. i can't wait to read more, but it's time to get ready for class.~
yay friends!!! i really liked the letter-format, and i can't wait to read more! so i'll go read more!
chapter three:
they is so cute! i know there's not 'luff' yet, but they're still cute, even as friends. yays!! i think i have time for one more chapter before i need to go to class. so i guess i'll read it!!
chapter four:
dude, rem, siri's gonna get lost in the woods. that's how he found you, remember? by getting lost! how is he ever gonna find his way back alone?
great story, i really love this so much!! i'm so excited by the possibilities! your writing is terrific and the plot is so juicey. i can't wait to read more, but it's time to get ready for class.~
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter five:
aaahhh!! rem scared rom by almost getting caught and tooked away! that sucks!! poor rem and siri though, they can't see each other no mores. *emo-tears**sigh* they'll figure something out eventually.
chapter six:
awws. rem can't talk to siri and he's sad. i love that james's mum told him to be nice to siri!! i hope they can at least kinda get along. i love regulus too. and yay to sirius for putting up the banner in his bedroom!! his mum's gonna flip. and imma laugh.
chapter seven:
james and sirius are making friends. kinda. they be friends soon? it be cute. well, yeah sirius. that's why they're called permenant. and poor remmy!! he's so abused by the wolf inside him. awwws... i feel bad.
chapter eight:
...i'm tempted to start banging my head into my desk at sirius's stupid actions, but it's not his fault. it's adorable that he wants to protect remmy from the danger, but... the irony! i know what's going on, and siri doesn't. siri thinks he's saving rem, but he's endangering himself. idiot!! oh goodness. sirius is so scared. it's kinda funny, but it's devastating. i really hope that he still loves rem afterward (of course he will) and that rem won't hurt him (of course he won't).
chapter nine:
this is so depressing. remmy ran off practically ready to cry, and then rom's all like, 'i protect my brother', and i'm all like, 'that is sooooo adorably hot!!'. yeah. i have a sibling complex. sue me. and sirius is so scared! he's shaking, and he doesn't know why!!! this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *can't add enough 'o's* cute!! it's heart-wrenching, but i love it!!~
aaahhh!! rem scared rom by almost getting caught and tooked away! that sucks!! poor rem and siri though, they can't see each other no mores. *emo-tears**sigh* they'll figure something out eventually.
chapter six:
awws. rem can't talk to siri and he's sad. i love that james's mum told him to be nice to siri!! i hope they can at least kinda get along. i love regulus too. and yay to sirius for putting up the banner in his bedroom!! his mum's gonna flip. and imma laugh.
chapter seven:
james and sirius are making friends. kinda. they be friends soon? it be cute. well, yeah sirius. that's why they're called permenant. and poor remmy!! he's so abused by the wolf inside him. awwws... i feel bad.
chapter eight:
...i'm tempted to start banging my head into my desk at sirius's stupid actions, but it's not his fault. it's adorable that he wants to protect remmy from the danger, but... the irony! i know what's going on, and siri doesn't. siri thinks he's saving rem, but he's endangering himself. idiot!! oh goodness. sirius is so scared. it's kinda funny, but it's devastating. i really hope that he still loves rem afterward (of course he will) and that rem won't hurt him (of course he won't).
chapter nine:
this is so depressing. remmy ran off practically ready to cry, and then rom's all like, 'i protect my brother', and i'm all like, 'that is sooooo adorably hot!!'. yeah. i have a sibling complex. sue me. and sirius is so scared! he's shaking, and he doesn't know why!!! this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *can't add enough 'o's* cute!! it's heart-wrenching, but i love it!!~
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter ten:
they are so cute!!! i love them so much. siri's gonna take healing lessons, and they're just so adorable together!! gawd. i really love this fic. the plot is so good and it's just wonderful.
chapter eleven:
yays!! he's making friends with james and peter. *glare* i hate peter. anyway, i'm really happy they're being friends now, it's good for them! and yay for rom not going anywhere!
chapter twelve:
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! wtf??? i so pissed now. i can't believe they would DO that! why the hell would ebony betray them? grrrrr... i'm so mad! and james is friends with sirius now! or is he just trying to get them in trouble? i hope not... i really want them to be friends!
chapter thirteen:
eerrrr. i hate sirius's dad. he's mean. poor rom, six years in azkaban. poor rem, all alone but for firenze and siri, who's not even there. this is really upsetting. i hate the angst!! yet, i live on it.
chapter fourteen:
dumblydore!! he's such a good friend to these poor kids. i hate rita, too. she's such a bitch, without even really meaning to! i really like dumbledore's cryptic way of giving siri info. it's awesome.
chapter fifteen:
poor remmy!! he's so upset, and so am i! i just sent my sister the link to this story, and she's about to start reading it. augh! i can't believe he didn't think the cloak smelled like sirius. i really thought that was what it would say, but noooooo~ooooooo. it smells like... like... CLEAN!! i've never been so offended by clean. zomg!!! they are soooooo cute!! i love remmy using siri as a pillow!! must love cute fluffy squish!!
chapter sixteen:
aaaahhh!! i hate james right now! i mean, i know it's a werewolf we're talking about, but, dammitall, does he have to be such a BITCH about it??? oh my gosh!! siri and rem are just TOO cute! i know rem's living in the forest practically all alone, but he's still adorable. i can't wait for them to hook up. i really wanna hug them and squeeze them and whatnot. because they're so. darned. cute. siri just said rem has a cute smile!! a CUTE SMILE!!!! yeeeeeessssssssssssssssss!!!!! siri's developing a crush and realizing it!! WHOOHOOO!!! i love it when love starts out slow and timid. it always works out better that way. *sigh* and then siri took him inside (which i so saw coming eventually) and then rom... rom... rom's a ghost? realsies??
chapter seventeen:
...so much just freakin happened i can't remember it all. umm...yay for james being their friend? i hope he's being sincere. i don't want to have to NOT like him again. i keep going back and forth and it's really tiring.
chapter eighteen:
eeeek!! james is sharing the invisibility cloak?!?!? zomg!! and now... *squeals* now siri is thinking about maybe he's gay!! yays!! aww. and siri pledged to find the cure for being a werewolf for him. they's so cuuuuuuuuuuute!!!
this story is fantastic! i really love reading it and i can't wait to go on. however, i have homework and sleeping to do, so i think i have to stop for tonight. great story, 5/5 +'s and this is like my fourth review. yays.~
they are so cute!!! i love them so much. siri's gonna take healing lessons, and they're just so adorable together!! gawd. i really love this fic. the plot is so good and it's just wonderful.
chapter eleven:
yays!! he's making friends with james and peter. *glare* i hate peter. anyway, i'm really happy they're being friends now, it's good for them! and yay for rom not going anywhere!
chapter twelve:
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! wtf??? i so pissed now. i can't believe they would DO that! why the hell would ebony betray them? grrrrr... i'm so mad! and james is friends with sirius now! or is he just trying to get them in trouble? i hope not... i really want them to be friends!
chapter thirteen:
eerrrr. i hate sirius's dad. he's mean. poor rom, six years in azkaban. poor rem, all alone but for firenze and siri, who's not even there. this is really upsetting. i hate the angst!! yet, i live on it.
chapter fourteen:
dumblydore!! he's such a good friend to these poor kids. i hate rita, too. she's such a bitch, without even really meaning to! i really like dumbledore's cryptic way of giving siri info. it's awesome.
chapter fifteen:
poor remmy!! he's so upset, and so am i! i just sent my sister the link to this story, and she's about to start reading it. augh! i can't believe he didn't think the cloak smelled like sirius. i really thought that was what it would say, but noooooo~ooooooo. it smells like... like... CLEAN!! i've never been so offended by clean. zomg!!! they are soooooo cute!! i love remmy using siri as a pillow!! must love cute fluffy squish!!
chapter sixteen:
aaaahhh!! i hate james right now! i mean, i know it's a werewolf we're talking about, but, dammitall, does he have to be such a BITCH about it??? oh my gosh!! siri and rem are just TOO cute! i know rem's living in the forest practically all alone, but he's still adorable. i can't wait for them to hook up. i really wanna hug them and squeeze them and whatnot. because they're so. darned. cute. siri just said rem has a cute smile!! a CUTE SMILE!!!! yeeeeeessssssssssssssssss!!!!! siri's developing a crush and realizing it!! WHOOHOOO!!! i love it when love starts out slow and timid. it always works out better that way. *sigh* and then siri took him inside (which i so saw coming eventually) and then rom... rom... rom's a ghost? realsies??
chapter seventeen:
...so much just freakin happened i can't remember it all. umm...yay for james being their friend? i hope he's being sincere. i don't want to have to NOT like him again. i keep going back and forth and it's really tiring.
chapter eighteen:
eeeek!! james is sharing the invisibility cloak?!?!? zomg!! and now... *squeals* now siri is thinking about maybe he's gay!! yays!! aww. and siri pledged to find the cure for being a werewolf for him. they's so cuuuuuuuuuuute!!!
this story is fantastic! i really love reading it and i can't wait to go on. however, i have homework and sleeping to do, so i think i have to stop for tonight. great story, 5/5 +'s and this is like my fourth review. yays.~