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for Masters of Manipulation

by Nerys

person Cristiana
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The added bits from chapters 21 and 23?... *sighs happily* What can I say, you truly master the rare and noble art that is writing high quality hot Dark Lord smut!! *bows*

Also
person risotto
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So the present time Voldermort was trying to save Hermione from dying..
person risotto
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww no way, I hope he doesn't take the second option. I would love to see a happy ending :)
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! I stole my cappy maker back...Pain in my butt trying to find a good hiding spot for it though...Now Mr. Fancy Pants is all pissed off cuz he has no more cappucino...*sigh* Ya just can't win with him...AND I got put back on kitchen duty...AGAIN! HMPH! That's fine, no more make-up sex for you anymore then Mister! Volders: Is that a fact?! *raises eyebrow* ME: *stuttering* well ummm yeah that's a fact...so there... Voldy: I know what you've been up to, you will pay for taking my cappy maker! ME: YOUR cappy maker?!!? Uh that was MINE! You stole it... Hot sexy Dark Lord: HAH! I AM hot! *strikes evil dark lord pose* ME: *fans self* Maybe I didn't quite mean the no make-up sex comment...but I'm still keeping the cappy maker... Voldy: AHA!!! So you DID take it! ME: damnit, well I would've gotten away with it too if you weren't so frickin distracting!! *runs to find new hiding spot* Voldy *shooting random spells* get back here you naughty little girl!!...and I don't even WEAR PANTS!!!! remember?!
person risotto
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update. Now she's back in her own time..wonder whta Tom will do?
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great fucking smut part
*smirks*
loved it.
tom is sooo hot haha

sucks that he had to cheat to win ahahaha

nice job
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
person Serpie
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I can't log in.
Anyway..WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

WHOA!!!!
So hot! Man, Tommy is SOO possessive and dominant that I just turn into a puddle of drool.Geees..Hermione is one hell of a lucky lady!!! Striptease and the 'oral stuff' is just superb! Yes, Hermione, you can't tease Dark Lords!!!!

Serpie decided to make a list of the books and all the travelling, since she keeps forgetting stuff...How do you remember it?

But then again, had I been Hermione (with Tom's tool 24/7 availible), I would have done anything for the man!!!!

Oh....

Great chapter!
I especially liked the SMUT and the ending stuff...So much adventure!!!!

AS ALWAYS, BRILLIANT!!!!!

P.S hey! Serpie doesn't do the 'Serpie
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think having already read this story, that this is my favourite chapter...The Dumbledore interaction was brilliant Nerys! Cant wait for more!