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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Son. Of. A. Bitch.
Four days. Four days were sacrificed to this fic! Four days of staying up far to late, doing far too little homework, and waking up far to early!
I found this fic a while back, but was currently reading a lot of Hermione/Snape, so I fell away from it. But when it suddenly popped back to the top of the list of Hermione/Voldemort - with a large COMPLETED in the summary...!
It was... so... sensical. As confusing as hell, but it made perfect sense! How do you do that!? And I was so bloody confused... I wanted Hermione and Tom to die, but them living was so much better! But then..... If this fic hadn't made me so damned happy I would be so damned pissed. BUT IT WAS SO GGGGOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD!!!!
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!! <--- that is how I feel right now. thanks to you. hope you're happy.
A few points of greatness:
- Gellert in his curly blond glory
- Dumbledore's very much in-character sly ways
- omg, how great are your four founders!?
- the amazing transition from cannon character to your own, seamless.
- Professor Neville... because I adore that idea
- a nifty historical view of Tom's years that included the original Death Eaters, Minerva, Ernest, etc...
- an incredibly intricate and confusing as hell plot with time traveling that made one want to cry, until it was suddenly explained perfectly. (you know those moments when it's like... "HOT DAMN I KNOW WHAT'S GOING HERE!"? I had so many of those)
- and, well, one can't complain on well written smut
- Holy Crap, ending cliff-hanger of doom.
- Probably THE BEST FIC i have read for this pairing.
Four days. Four days were sacrificed to this fic! Four days of staying up far to late, doing far too little homework, and waking up far to early!
I found this fic a while back, but was currently reading a lot of Hermione/Snape, so I fell away from it. But when it suddenly popped back to the top of the list of Hermione/Voldemort - with a large COMPLETED in the summary...!
It was... so... sensical. As confusing as hell, but it made perfect sense! How do you do that!? And I was so bloody confused... I wanted Hermione and Tom to die, but them living was so much better! But then..... If this fic hadn't made me so damned happy I would be so damned pissed. BUT IT WAS SO GGGGOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD!!!!
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!! <--- that is how I feel right now. thanks to you. hope you're happy.
A few points of greatness:
- Gellert in his curly blond glory
- Dumbledore's very much in-character sly ways
- omg, how great are your four founders!?
- the amazing transition from cannon character to your own, seamless.
- Professor Neville... because I adore that idea
- a nifty historical view of Tom's years that included the original Death Eaters, Minerva, Ernest, etc...
- an incredibly intricate and confusing as hell plot with time traveling that made one want to cry, until it was suddenly explained perfectly. (you know those moments when it's like... "HOT DAMN I KNOW WHAT'S GOING HERE!"? I had so many of those)
- and, well, one can't complain on well written smut
- Holy Crap, ending cliff-hanger of doom.
- Probably THE BEST FIC i have read for this pairing.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was such a good story. Well put together and everything. I loved how you worked your story in with the original story.
Sam
Sam
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello Nerys,
Happy new year, and thank god u finished it, I absolutely loved the ending, and I hope u r writing a sequel, so hes a father and the DADA professor, and he is still plotting to recreate his Lord voldermort identity, I loved this ending than the one on FF, cause it is believeable, and I really didnt want for hermione and tom to have gone through hell and back, and not end up together. The one on FF is good, but I just love this one better...lol. I hope u doing a different sequel for this one. And Lord I loved last 3 lines, my jaw was on the floor, especially when he was actually hatching another basilisk...freaky shit. I loved that he and harry are friends but I just wonder if hes lying about all of his emotions for the ppl he has come to know now. ARGHHHHHHH the blasted thing left me with more questions. Damn u Nerys, sigh hope to hear from u soon my email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail, let me know if u r doing the sequel. And u r my fav tom/voldie/hermione writer, you have imspired me ALOT. i have read your other story,"The bittersweet taste of victory" it was also brilliant, it had me screaming so many times. Hope to hear from u soon and congratulations on completing this story.
Respect
Scarlet
Happy new year, and thank god u finished it, I absolutely loved the ending, and I hope u r writing a sequel, so hes a father and the DADA professor, and he is still plotting to recreate his Lord voldermort identity, I loved this ending than the one on FF, cause it is believeable, and I really didnt want for hermione and tom to have gone through hell and back, and not end up together. The one on FF is good, but I just love this one better...lol. I hope u doing a different sequel for this one. And Lord I loved last 3 lines, my jaw was on the floor, especially when he was actually hatching another basilisk...freaky shit. I loved that he and harry are friends but I just wonder if hes lying about all of his emotions for the ppl he has come to know now. ARGHHHHHHH the blasted thing left me with more questions. Damn u Nerys, sigh hope to hear from u soon my email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail, let me know if u r doing the sequel. And u r my fav tom/voldie/hermione writer, you have imspired me ALOT. i have read your other story,"The bittersweet taste of victory" it was also brilliant, it had me screaming so many times. Hope to hear from u soon and congratulations on completing this story.
Respect
Scarlet
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've missed you so much!!!
Where the hell have you been? Are you ok?
I loved this alternate ending, just love love love it!!!
Where the hell have you been? Are you ok?
I loved this alternate ending, just love love love it!!!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah hahahha, I totally love the last 5 paragraphs of this story. That is one hell of an ending!
Yay! It's finished.
Def. loved it!!!
What's next? Hope you write more soon :-)
Yay! It's finished.
Def. loved it!!!
What's next? Hope you write more soon :-)
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been taking my time and reading your story for the past two days. I just finished chapt. 12 and I decided to post a review finally.
I'm a bit confused as what exactly is going on. In terms of the books and their power to transport people back in time. The situation where Hermione saved held baby Harry, then they shot back in time and now Hogwarts has balls...okay, yea, you completely lost me. Maybe its cleared up in the upcoming chapters and I'll have to wait and see. But it really seems like you have A LOT of plot going on in your story. I think you should consider restructing as you write more (as I assume the story is still writing 'in progress') and maybe explain some more or seperate situations a bit more. I'm not sure.
Anyway, it seems really interesting so far and I'm glad you're chapters aren't super short either. You are very creative :o)
I'm a bit confused as what exactly is going on. In terms of the books and their power to transport people back in time. The situation where Hermione saved held baby Harry, then they shot back in time and now Hogwarts has balls...okay, yea, you completely lost me. Maybe its cleared up in the upcoming chapters and I'll have to wait and see. But it really seems like you have A LOT of plot going on in your story. I think you should consider restructing as you write more (as I assume the story is still writing 'in progress') and maybe explain some more or seperate situations a bit more. I'm not sure.
Anyway, it seems really interesting so far and I'm glad you're chapters aren't super short either. You are very creative :o)
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!
You can't leave a cliff-hanger like that! What does he decide?
Update soon, please :o)
You can't leave a cliff-hanger like that! What does he decide?
Update soon, please :o)
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMFG, this has to be the most brilliant, intricate, hot, enthralling, and mind fucking best TMR/Voldie/hermy fic ever, to take 24 chapters in one dose had my mind, spinning. I dont know where to start but this is so believeable and the way u tied in the last book with such an originally mind blowing and heart stopping plot, absolute brilliance. The heat and chemistry of Tom and hermy is breath taking and truly believeable, and their dangerous, but effaicious banter at the beginning it really had my blood pumping it was hot. But the sex, the thrashing of emotions, the battles, the bond, the books, the meetings with future voldie (heck that double trouble of a depraved smut was bout the hottest and most wrong-est thing I have ever read, but it was soooo good), the time jumps, and those infernal mysterious parchments causing all sorts of trouble, it is all just absolutely bloody perfect. I could go on and on about your blatant masterpiece but I will run out of adjectives to describe my numerable feelings for this fic, and I would also be writing this for a while, so please continue with this brilliance soon cause u really left it hanging. UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I got tired of waiting for you to update the story visited your author page on FanFiction dot net and boom! This? lol Needless to say I bow down at the greatness. You said you were going to write a different ending how different? Will that weird bond in that oh so very smutty scene *blush blush* cause any more problem or is that just going to magnify everything else?
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH THAT RAT BASTARD!!! He stole it back!! Sneaky little snake that he is...grrr...Well fine then!! I'm buying a new one!! Take that TOM!!! Voldemort: *smoldering glare* Oh you think it will be that easy do you?! Well it just so happens I have a very big house as you know...A couple more cappy-makers couldn't hurt *taps finger on chin*..... Me: OH NO!! I don't think so Mr. Sinister....Voldemort: Mr. Sinister...hmmm I kind of like that...Me: *smacks forehead*