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Wait a minute... how come Hermione manage to see James, Lily and Harry when they are still under the Fidelius Charm and Peter hasn't told her about their location like he had to Voldemort? Hm... or did Voldemort use Peter to completely break the spell? I mean... shouldn't the secret still be kept since Peter is alive after all? Or did Dumbledore break the spell?
Something here, and in canon as well, doesn't make completely sense.
Oh, and now I realise why I didn't remember her talking to Salazar, because she didn't... oh, well :)

At chapter 14 and finally finding a mistake to snigger about! "Hermione saw the robes fly towards her to bind" Hihi... sorry ;) It's the only one I've seen actually, so I don't think your mistakes are that bad. Or maybe it's just a proof of what a bad editor I am. Well... you would know about that seeing you have read what I've written. Anyway, at that sentence I just got such a visual of Hermione being attacked by a lot of flying robes. Which would wrap someone up just as nicely as ropes, of course ;) Oh, and I enjoy the little extra smut you added in this chapter! And nooo, they won't touch each other again, no, not at all...

Just thought you should know, you have named chapter three "chapter 4" in the document. Got a little confused there but then I realised I wasn't the wrong making some mistake, YOU were ;) Hehe, just teasing. I had forgotten most of this story so it's fun to reread it again. I had even forgot she was in Slytherin as well... and that Salazar sent her the book. Oh, well :) now I'll go to bed!

LOVE this story - soooooooo very much. Especially the ending. LOVELOVELOVE!!!
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This story was truly enthralling. You had me hooked from the start and you didn't let up. You proved that you can write one heck of a story with a complicated plot and just the right amount of hot smut. A perfect 10 out of 10 I assure you.

Tickled. Touched. Chilled. Entranced. I read the whole thing from start to finish with only bathroom and water breaks, in the middle of the night, when I had to work at nine am. I am a very big fan of this pairing, and it is rarely done so well, especially on this scale. I was enthralled. It seemed like something that seriously could have happened in the HP canon universe, but went unmentioned or got glossed over to protect the readers. I wish I had the kind of skill and creativity to make something anywhere near this good.
When I started I wasn't sure about it. I am not a big fan of the "travel back in time and fix Voldemort" idea. I always thought that he was just too evil from the get go to be dramatically changed by a brief visit from our heroine. I have always thought that for something like that to work, they would have to change history entirely by adopting him as a baby and training his natural evil impulses into constructive lanes. You see way too many gushy Voldemorts way too quickly out there, and we are to believe it is all because of just a couple of days, weeks, or months in contact with a woman he is exceedingly prejudiced against? It is so tricky to keep him his naturally evil self, but let circumstances give any latent feelings a chance of rising, especially in this pairing. The form this particular Voldemort took was breathtaking. I think I did drool a little. A trip to his bed would undoubtedly kill me, but I would probably enjoy it. If I was worthy.
I was so glad to see someone include real consequences of time hopping as so many of these fics are prone to ignore. The ending only makes sense. We are after all, talking about Voldemort! There is no one more sneaky and evil! It makes me wonder what would happen next, not sure if I want to know, but fatally curious, and that is the mark of great storytelling. Well Done!

I read this story on FF.net a few months back, and i loved it then (thought tbh i wanted to absolutely MURDER you for the ending. And not the fun, easy type of murder. Like the slowly rip your head from your body type of murder :P) because whilst it was perhaps more realistic in that story for Tom/Hermione to go their different ways, it still sucked. Big time. And seriously? Hermione/Krum? that made me cringe. YOU may prefer the story on FF.net, but i certainly didn't.

Aside from the ending, i really enjoyed the one of FF.net, though not nearly as much as i enjoyed this one. I mean, really. But the whole threesome thing? That should be in dictionary under confusing, with a side note saying also see weird. I mean. not that it wasn't great ('cause, it was) , but the concept is just..... really, really strange. When i first saw the whole M/M/F thing i was like "really? with who?" and then i got like a quarter into the chapter and was like "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY GOD."

But seriously, like the whole way through the epilogue i was going "no, no, no, i don't want to read this again." Imagine my surprise when it turned out the way it did? I kinda jumped up and down and went "YES!" And about the whole Tom still being an evil bastard? I would have been disappointed if he wasn't. I mean really, what's a bad boy when there's no bad? The whole dangerous/evil thing is why i... i would say like, but that doesn't really seem appropriate. LV isn't exactly the type of character you go around saying you 'like'. It doesn't seem like enough, does it? But yeah you get the point. Anyways, are you planning on doing a sequel like the one on ff.net (*cough*the one you haven't done anything on in forever on ff.net *cough*)? I suppose it'll probably be better on FF.net 'cause here if TR/HG make it will be like "well... yeah..." and there it will be controversial and exciting. Personally i still don't think she trusts him not to be doing what he's doing here, because she knows him too well, so there is a bit of.... y'know, TMR/HJG development, but not as much.

Not that i mind about the whole MoM part 2 thingy, 'cause tbh i would rather you just continued with the Apprentice, and there is only so much one can expect from one person at a time, and yet............

Well, anyway, great story. I'm looking forewaord to the next chapter of the Apprentice.

This story was nothing short of brilliant!!!! I stayed up all night reading this, because not only was it spell binding, but it also offered another alternative to how Tom Riddle could be if he felt love, but at the same time not shedding his Slytherin qualities. Hence the reason why Hermione will probably never marry him, due to that fact. Her mother didn't raise no fool.

Argh..naughty Tom Riddle..really..what's so fun about taking over the world..

OMG That was awsome I think besides the wonderful threesome...I do belive the end was my fave omg that was awsome.