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for Stretching the Limits

by slashpervert

person jujukitty
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very nice, love the interatction between the two, would love to see another chapter to this
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, that was almost far too much. I was turned on all the way through this.
The one thing I'd like noted is that the word is 'cum', not 'come'. Spelt differently so you don't confuse the context. And (although you didn't do it) 'came' is not the past tense of 'cum'. But I digress.
I had a good time reading this story. it was pretty believable and the sex scene was honest and trusting, it made me want to be in Seamus' place all the way. Your sex fics (or at least the one's I've read) are alwas a pleasure. Especially the non major character ones like this one. Good stuff, 4 stars,
Shiki
person maryjane
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE LOVE LOVE this!! Soooo fucking hott! I think you should do another sequel. Something really kinky. For instance... you know how Seamus was fantasizing about blowing Oliver under his desk? Well perhaps you should run with that idea, only Oliver would be in class at the time. Something to that effect I think. Just an idea...
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!