rate_review Reviews

What a roller coaster of a chapter! You take us from being anxious and intrigued by Draco's curse, by the way for a minute there, you had me thinking that Draco was going to ask Harry to perform the curse so that they would be bonded together for life. What an awful spell that was. Then you take us to being totally HOT after giving us such an intense lovemaking scene. that was just HMM MMM good : ) Thanks! I like that Draco was taking control and how he took control. That's the Draco we know and love. Loved how you described their perceptions of it al. You do Draco/Harry sex so well : ) And then you take us to the tension of their first real argument since they've established that they are in love. I knew that was coming, and you even told us it was, but it didn't stop me from cringing during the build up to it. I knew Draco was digging himself deeper every time he spoke. At one point I was like "Um, no you didn't, Metamorphasis is Harry's, you better recognize!" He was being pretty presumptious, and he should have known better in how he presented his ideas, considering how long and hard Harry fought to guard it. Of course he wouldn't understand why Harry wouldn't help him though but I like that you've made Harry strong enough to recognize his need to have something of his own that stays true to his goals and values. He's not weak and co-dependent, which makes him even more sexy in this fic. I like how he walked away. I thought he was a bit melodramatic, probably to compensate for his insecurity in taking such a firm stance, but I think he did the right thing. I hope Draco doesn't freak out on him. I know he loves him. Very interested to see what happens from here. GREAT update : )

ah very good chapter, cant wait to see what kinda hissy fit draco throws if any..lol

This is SOOO good! I really love the way everything is developing. Great job!
update!

Interesting developing with this new curse!

Please update chapter 43 soon ^_^

Jan

Soooo need chapter 43!!!!

Thanks for writing another glorious chapter. please keep it up.

Another wonderful chapter. Just some food for thought. I really like Alice and if you decide that Harry or Draco are to continute there family lines. I think she would make a good surrogate mother if you could somehow make it fit.

I really like this story. I actually laughed hard at the vision of Lucious cowering and crying out as it seemed his body was disappearing before his very eyes swollowed by shadows! I would have gave anything though if you had added he had pissed himself before Draco and Harry with Draco giving a witty comment about it. That would have been the icing on the cake. Harry really couldn't ask Lucious to remove the spell as he had insinuated he already knew what it was. I guess a trip to a dark arts library will be in order :]

MightyGryffindor

that was some crazy azz acting Harry was doing. He's such a badass in this fic. Although I knew he was able to do all of this, it's still really fascinating to see him do his thing. I loved how he worked Alice, and got her to see reason. She can do much better (not than Draco, poor thing, who can do better than him?) but than the deal she was about to get. The brief longing of Draco to succumb to Lucius's offer was very human and real. I know I would be tempted if i were in his position..but it really was a bad deal...I'm actually sort of glad that Lucius said Draco couldn't back peddle and had to keep Harry out of his bed once married, he probably sealed Draco's resolve with that. Now I wonder if Lucius will simply back off or will he be moved to support his son now that he knows what kind of power he's dealing with, real or not, the fact that Harry could make him believe it is real power. I want Harry to give Nusante a taste of some of that. LOL. And during that scene I almost expected Draco to jump up and defend Lucius or at least tell Harry to back off...but I why should he? Loved that Draco realizes that he loves all of Harry and the fact that you mixed pity in with his longing and pride really speaks to how layered his feelings are. Can't wait to see them duke it out about expectations for the future..and I hope it gets resolved quickly so they can get back to defending their right to love each openly. AWESOME update : ))))

Rock on Alice Moonstone! I think I love that girl more every time you write her into a chapter, and
that, my friend, is as they say, the troof! Its good to see such a strong female character, not
necessarily a main character, but nonetheless powerful, and memorable...in a good way.
Rock on Harry Potter, the man with the mask..or like 80 of them. I love his arggg..but not really
argggh...intimidation techniques. He's so fake hardcore.
Rock on Draco Malfoy, for simple grace under pressure.
and finally
Rock on Lomonaaeron, for continuously updating long ass, but consistently fabulous stories,
no matter the situation, and with no hesitation what so ever...
Thank you,
Lunatic With a Hero Complex