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for Changing of the Guard

by Lomonaaeren

person MoonTart
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This, like your other stuff, is excellant. Looking forward to the next installment.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that this story is going in an absolutely wonderful direction. I think that your take on how Harry's experience in the war would affect the way he interacted with society is completely new and definitely intriguing. If you consider starting a mailing list for this story, I would like to be on it. My email address is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com. I can't wait to read more.
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
person alma
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the plot!
person Lacegag
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say that you surprise me with your ingenuity and your originality every time you put out a new story. This story will certainly be interesting and it has a very original plot. I have read a few
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Wondering if you will have Harry meet Draco as himself. I would think it would be better to be upfront with each other. If he doesn't, when they start a relationship later, Draco may not understand. They could make an awesome team going up against the Malfoys.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O oh, DO update soon! I have never read a story like this before, and I can't wait to see what will happen now...

Great work... ^.^
person Tac
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I don't know HOW you manage to work on so many fics at one time but I'm not complaining! I was immediately taken by the summary - it sounds like one of those '50s movies with the shady yet confident lover with a cigar and trenchcoat solving a cheezy mystery, and I mean that in the best possible romantic popcorn-and-chocolate-with-your-movie-on-a-rainy-day way! If that doesn't make sense, completely ignore it, it's a mood thing for me :). Anyway, Harry's character so far is amazing; mysterious and secretive yet bold. The perfect liar - I wouldn't want to give him up if I hired him! There were a few spelling mistakes but nothing I'd fault you for - keep it up, I can't wait to see where this goes!
person Faery
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the beginnig of this story, and I hope new chapters will follow soon! I like the way you study the relations between individuals, their perceptions of each other, et the best way to deceive each of them!
Faery
(sory if I made mistakes, english is far from being my first language^^)
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo. this is great. That you started with another characters situation was great since it got me into the whole mindset and now I can concentrate on the Harry/Draco rather than how it is happening. Hopefully we wont have to wait long. *hint hint* Nellie


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person Luvdonite
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your plots are always awesome. I don't know why i'm still surprised when a new story of yours comes out. I love that your characters are always so strong and different. love it and update soon.