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I always enjoy reading your stories, but I have never had as much fun as with this one, both for the plot and the humour in your style (my favorite was the celebratory wank, that

You always come up with the most unique and insteresting plots. I always enjoy readying your stories. I cant wait for the next update. I can tell this will be another one of my favorite fanfics.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Can't wait for the next installment ^_^

* sigh *
That was perfect. I love the interaction, espeically Harry's internal dialogue. He's never been very controlled around Draco - it's fun watching Harry bleed through Brian's mask.

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

Sigh...OK, you got me...again! First chapter promises that this is gonna be devilishly fun and full of unexpected epiphanies...I wonder how many people do this in our own world, I'm sure more than we'll ever know. I like how you're dealing with homophobia and racism in regards to blood status. I love the idea of Harry's business and it's perfect for him. I'm curious about why Narcissa needs to be pushed in a different way, can't wait to hear what that's all about. I hope Draco can actually accomplish his plan, but something tells me he's gonna get distracted and a lot more than he bargained for....Looking forward to the laughter, especially after you scared the bejesus outta me with that Trespass story :p

Ch. 2- Oh what a tangled web we weave!!! Talk about lying and being knee deep in it...this is gonna get so messy if feelings get involved. I'm loving it! I'm surprised Harry crafted someone like Brian, sounds so close, too close to Harry..which is probably why Draco is so smitten with that one. lol@Purity....nice! would like to see a separate story on Draco with that guy at some point. The whole lying thing is also gonna be interesting in terms of how they build intimacy and trust if Harry ever reveals himself. How can you trust someone who lies that effortlessly? Now that I see what Draco meant by his mother needing to be pushed differently, I'm a bit worried....sounds like a lot of drama and heartbreak for her, all for vengeance on his father....that may wind up hurting him if this isn't done carefully. So excited about this...ok, off to read Ch. 3.

lol@ Draco's celebratory wank! I can't wait until they show out at the Manor...and to see how Harry really handles Lucius, Narcissa and even Draco. I like that Harry is already losing himself in Brian to the point where he's not being careful like he usually is. I can tell already, like your other story, this one is going to be as much about self discovery and identity development as connecting with someone else. I love the push and push back of these two, it's really exciting to read and you write them so well. I wonder if Harry knows that subconsciously that story he told Draco is truer than he thinks it is? lol.

Wow. I'm on the edge of my seat. This is a really good story. Very intriguing and very original. I like it a lot.
update!

wow! that's a great 1st meeting. I can't wait 'til "Brian" meets Draco's parents. I could just imagine Lucius' anger. I think that Harry & Brian are just a little bit too much alike and it's just a matter of time until Draco starts getting suspicious and connects the dots.

when I read the part when they met and the their banter, the way they lied and kept their emotions to themselves, it made me feel a bit inadequate. I can't even lie without my eyes shifting everywhere. shameful.

anyways update soon.