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Thank you so much, that was so much fun to read, and, the party part, just absolutely hilarious.
The description was very graphic too, especially during the walk towards Draco

about #3..or 'Brian'.

Oh man, this is pretty good..no this is DAMN good! :-) I liked the banter
between the two men, it was like watching a tennis match.

Anyway I'm glad I'm able to be 'part of this' while you're still writing it. By
the way, got through reading your horror story 2 days ago, all I got to say is...no
comment. O_o

I already know [yes, I do] how this is going to play out, because if Draco is like
ANY flesh & blood person with ANY type of feelings, he will either be hurt deeply
when he finds out, just plain angry at the deception..OR both. Because he's about to
get in TOO deep as time goes on.

I just HOPE he remembers, he asked for it...and I'm acting like these people really
exist.

Okay I said too much. :-D

...one more thing I forgot to mention.

Too bad, Purity isn't a REAL person I would have LOVED to read about Draco going
one-on-one with him...*ahem* in the bedroom. *BIG smile*

Better yet, if you have time in the future to do another story, maybe create a
character like him. The man sounded delicious!


side note: what age range are you??? ...and what does 'AR' mean in summaries, is it
'alternate reality'?

Excellent chapter. Interesting to see how the rest of the party goes.
update

LOL! Brilliant. Just as deliciously scandalous as I had hoped it would be! I'm loving the tension and electricity between these two..I can't wait until they actually shag. OMG, that kiss was so damn hot...I could picture it. The image of Narcissa and Lucius in complete shock and their normally cool masks being cracked and on the floor was great. I like how Harry seems to know Draco's needs and thoughts almost immediately and sometimes before Draco knows himself. I do wish he had invited Blaise, that would have been hysterical to have someone like them there who didn't take the situation too seriously. I kinda feel bad for Narcissa, but not too much because like you pointed out, she's in denial and Draco has tried to warn her. I'm glad to hear that he's at least considered what it may be like for her through out his plan. I can't wait to see how Lucius will play out Draco's plan..I just hope he doesn't do anything too unexpected and try to have Harry oops Brian killed. Yay for Ron and Hermione having a baby girl and for Hermione keeping her last name in the true spirit of feminism. lol. I like how you're challenging traditional notions about homosexual relationships through Harry, the whole bottom/top and gendered roles thing, that we as fan fiction writers and readers often are guilty of ourselves needs to be shown for what it is-a stereotype. It makes me rethink how I may want to develop some of my slash characters and stories I write. I can't wait to see how Draco is gonna try to get in Harry head and heart to discover the truth of the matter---especially when it's not clear if Harry even knows that for himself. Great chapter...I'm so looking forward to the next third day when you update.

OMGEEEEE. i love you. its a really great story. it would be hot if harry grabbed draco's ass or something while they were dancing. i now u wrote out the whole story probably but i can hope. lol. it is great tho. jus dont make draco toooo mad when harry reveals the truth. itd be betta if he finds out on his own and deals with it then suprises harry that he knows. i like that. less pain on both sides. jus some healthy pointers. do wit them wat u will. great job tho.

Gah! I lost you there for a while but now that I've found you I wont lose you again 'specially if you add me to your mailing list. Hint hint.

noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au

Great chappies. Cant wait for the next...well I can wait cos I gotta and all, but don't wanna wait. I want it NOW!!!
Whew, my little tantrum is over with now. Sorry bout that. Anyway, mailing list add me K? Nellie

Blaise sounds like fun!

Hope he joins the party soon ^_^

loved the chpt 4. I love Lucius' part when you whammed! him with Brian. jaw hanging open. awesome. and the kiss...wow

A challenge again? For Draco, it seems interesting and challenging with promising good return...however, I agree that he must remember Brian is an actor...I just wonder what his reaction be if he finds out that is Harry....or would he question Harry...which sides of him are real?

For Harry, his saying of not submitting is...thoughtful, what is he afraid of?