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I LOVE the allegory, metaphor, symbolism of the dance that you used in this chapter. Beautifully done. Even as a non dancer and someone who has not been versed in traditional formal dance, I was able to see how someone who was trained and naturally inclined to dance could read their partner through it because of the way you described it! Excellent! I like that Harry is revealing himself as a innovative learner who can improvise when he needs to, that's always the stuff that makes passion exciting-not knowing exactly what your partner is gonna do but trusting that they'll still keep you on your toes. It's interesting that Draco expected Brian/Harry to fail on that turn, you almost get the feeling that perhaps that would have been easier for him. I'm sure everytime Harry gets something right, Draco feels a little more swept up and vulnerable. I LOVE how Draco thinks that they're both too good to make a disaster of the dance. His confidence is so sexy, I want to see him shaking though, and I know that's coming as he gets more infatuated. I wasn't expecting Narcissa to be that blunt with Brian, but I definitely can see why she was...Looking forward to seeing how Harry handles Draco's parents, if he comes out with flying colors, Draco should be nervous about his heart. Did I tell you how excited I get when you email me that you've updated on this story? It really makes me smile...

I think that of all the stories that I have followed of yours over the past few months, this one may turn out to be my favorite. There's just such a delightful frivolity to the way that Draco shocks his parents and guests, and the way that Harry enjoys designing his 'masks' in that back room of Metamorphosis. Its so lighthearted, the shifting of person to person, and the loving of the nature of each of those people. But its also a little sad that Harry felt the ultimate need to discover a mask to live in permanently.
Thank you,
Lunatic With a Hero Complex

Great story! I like the concept, but I think Harry is not much like him. He's cold and he seems hasn't any feeling to Draco despite arousal. But I wonder how Draco act when he'll realize that Brain is Harry xD Can't wait for that! "Where has he been all my life?" Next to you Draco xD And I hope there will be some hot moments in near future :) I wanna write you more, but my English is too poor, pathetic...

I somehow missed this being posted, and I love this idea for a plot. It's complicated and light, but allows for deeper levels once Harry and Draco are more deeply involved with each other and I'm absolutely fascinated by it :)

Great job on this one!

Ah! I came back to a double update! Definitely made my day! I couldn't stop smiling reading these two chapters!! The charade is just so tense and real and Dangerous! I had to laugh when 'Brian' and Draco entered the party, the reactions were priceless! Your powers of description spellbind me ^_^
Well done, especially with the equal roles deal; it's even better than when Harry and Draco just trade off being 'the girl' because it's so raw and I totally feel the excitement in their exchanges. I can't wait for another update and I feel awful that I have nothing critical to say! It's just... it's too good! There. ^_~

OMG! Another potentially amazing story from you! I think this might be one of my favorite. I am particularly interested in the psychology of Harry...and of course, how Draco would deal with that. I can't wait until the next installment. I love to be amazed by you!

lol, that was so much fun to read... i burst out laughing a couple of times, well done!!!

I could *see* that kiss - and the heat just radiating from the two of them. I have to admit a small sympathy for Narcissa. She brought this upon herself, but I'm sure it really hurts her. This is probably the harshest blow she's had to endure in twelve years...

Sooo need chapter 5!!!

Can't wait to read the 'dance part'!!! And what will happen after the party! ^___^