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Lovely.
You seem to have enjoyed writing this.

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OMG!!! LOL! Gotcha, ya bastard! LOVED the drama, suspense, and set up in this chapter. Very interesting how Harry is becoming conscious of himself slipping into his personas, and what a good thing that is, and how it could also be a liability as well. Nothing is black and white in this fic, which makes it even better. I loved that Nusante was a part of being fooled, he deserves to get played! And how shocking was the revelation about Lucius! My mouth dropped to the floor...I hope DRaco goes and finds this old lover of his. I'd love to see Lucius's reaction to that! Does that mean that Lucius is bi or just gay and in denial? Poor Narcissa...does she know? Speaking of which, she like disappeared several chapters ago, will she be making a reapperance? I'd love to hear her thoughts on what's gone on and about this latest revelation. In a way, I suppose it's good Lucius rejected his lover, because perhaps we wouldn't have had Draco! lol. I loved the scene with Harry being patient with Draco as he struggled to do what Harry does so effortlessly, and that it was after Harry told him how much he loved him that he finally was able to get it right. I loved Draco's cousin! He was a hoot...and his parting words to Draco should be heeded. Don't argue with Harry too much, he has other options! : ) GREAT update...can't wait to see what comes of the 'outing' of Mr. Grey!

That was hilarious. PLEase PLease write more soon!~

Hi, and I have to say that you've written an excellent story that is both fascinating and awe inspiring in its wealth of detail and plotline. The way you describe your characters is very compelling as each stands out as their own person, even Harry's many personas. One thing stands out in my mind that perhaps Lucius is under a similar curse of being enslaved to his wife much like he attempted to do to his son. Cousin Maxwell certainly seemed surprised that he would give up a promising lover for the straight life he now seems to accept without reservations of any kind. I truly have enjoyed this so far and only hope to see it to the end. So please continue!

* worshipping Lomonaaeren *
Everything you write is impeccable. There is no flaw to find. I'm engaged and absorbed (not always the same things,) and left thinking new and amazing thoughts.
Great stuff. Great great great stuff.

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Well I'm glad that the argument resolved itself. I'm so proud for Draco on getting the glamor right, hopefully he will get better. Lol. Loved the ending.

That last moment was hilarious.
The whole Transfiguration and glamour thing was slightly confusing though. Is there a second part to the restaurant scene where Draco and Harry will reveal themselves or was the surprise that the patrons could now see Wilde and Grey when they kissed? Also, this will embarrass Grey and lose him some credibility but will it fully stop him from operating Counterstrike?
Great chapter!
update!

That was a surprise. Harry is so slytherin. If Draco didn't know Therris was going to be there, did he know Harry was going to kiss Grey? I don't think Draco would be happy that Harry is making plans without fully includung him.

i smell some MAJOR mischeif coming!!!! *evil little grin*

anyways, a very awesome chapter!!!! looking forward to your next one me dearie!!!!


laters! ~_^