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Another great chapter, not that I

Now that cliffy was just mean! I have nothing more to say *pout*


(except that you keep it fascinating, as always!)

See, I had to edit my review because I didn't even read to the last line...I figured it was Lucius...but Narcissa? That does seem more likely, especially since you've been dropping hints that she's been perceptive and intelligent in how she watches Brian/Harry. But...

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is one mother of a cliffy sister! Awesome awesome....I can't wait to see how Harry handles this. And wow at Draco doing a background check, it was gonna fall apart soon anyway. I like that line about suspicion being an passion killer and the game they played while Harry was eating his cake was intense! and LOL@Lucius's impotence spell. Please please update soon, I have to see how Harry handles this...and why in the world would Narcissa not tell Draco? AWESOME update!

Personally, I hope Narcissa works to get Harry and Draco together. Screw what Lucius wants or thinks.

great chappies. what did Lusius do to the salad. Buh buh buuuuh. Bad boy. Go to my room. I am so glad that you actually keep me up to date with your story through the emails. not many others do even when they ask if you wanna be put on mailing lists. Well im a little peeved that this story is gonna be sooo long, but only cos that means I have to wait to see how it all turns out and I am one impatient grrrl. well keep up the good work and tie your muse to a chair so i cant get away. nellie

I'm not sure if I've reviewed this yet ... So I thought I better leave one just in case! Absolutely great story so far, I'm really loving it and I think its an extremely original idea, and that it works really really well.

Brian sounds cute, my only thoughts are if Harry(Brian?) falls for Draco and Draco falls for Brian, is whether Harry will ever let Draco know who he really is, and if he does I'd imagine Draco's reaction would be very very bad. Another thought was, maybe Harry could live as Brian. After all, it's Brian that Draco fell in love with so I'm not too sure that he'd be in love with Harry ... but at the same time you made a point to point out that Harry and Brian were very similar, therefore maybe Draco could love Harry as Harry, and not Brian, because they are so similar in personal issues.

Hmm, it's definitely something I've been thinking on, I like this story and cant wait for an update!
~gorgeeousbowneyes

J'adore tu!! Je t'adore!! Every time I tell myself, "Nelle, you will review at the end of this chapter!!" and I never do. I just thought I'd tell you I love you et je adore sein story!! It's wonderful and just wait I need to lift a depressed mood, which I seem to get alot lately. Anyway, I love you and can't wait for the next chapter!!

I miss my sweet Harry. I Know he's all grown up & mature. and brian is all suave and smooth and all but i want Harry back. will you be able to go more in depth into Harry as you go into brian in the following chapters?

What a good chapter, I like that you add these little moments of the real Harry into all of the acting, the image of Ron and Brian running into each other struck me when I read the Prophet interview. I wonder how much Ron would like or dislike Brian. It seems as if Harry has always drawn a neat little line between Metamorphosis business and the increasingly small parts of his 'real' life. It surprises me that he wouldn't imagine them merging, even if he does primarily rotate in pureblood circles. Ron and Hermione are relatively famous themselves, they are names in a lot of rather important places, and if Harry's playing in the pureblood races, he'll eventually orbit into those circles. I can't wait for the update, and you do seem to update this one just a little bit more often.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

Interesting. Harry really is locked up alone in his little world. And yes, I meant I want Harry to come out his identity closet, not sexual closet but I can see that's going to be difficult considering Ron's comment on Draco's sexuality, and thus Harry's. That was quite unfortunate. I wonder how many people go around talking about others openly not knowing their hurting those closet to them the way Ron did with that comment. I'm glad you gave us some insight into why Harry will probably remain in the closet and showed some of the realistic conflicting feelings he has doing what he's doing, especially with Draco at the manor, considering what happened in DH. You got me wondering now if this can be a happy ending. This story reminds me of a dude I once dated, he was so into trying to figure you out and the whole game playing/assessing compatibility and wits thing...I couldn't hang, especially when my feelings got involved, I just said "screw it" and fell. I wonder if Draco is about to do that. He seems to be the one that has to constantly remind himself that Brian is an actor like he's in danger of forgetting. I do like Harry's starting to get affected by Draco's touches and the way they're kinda posing and displaying themselves for each other as if saying "see I'm special". I can't wait to see who falls first and how it will be received. I wonder what Lucius did to Draco's food. LOL. Can't wait to see how they deal with him in the next chapter!