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What a cruel way to leave us, haha. This was a great chapter, and I'm very curious as to how Narcissa will react when they meet and Harry explains *something.* Can't wait for the next chapter!

I LOVE the end of this chapter! I cannot wait te read the confrontation^^

Narcissa has always been one of those characters that only has a very limited set space of characterization in the books, but that nonetheless fascinates me. I think I was definitely waiting, maybe subconciously, for her to realize who was necking with her son, and I mean who was 'really' necking with her son. Now that someone else knows that Brian is Harry, it feels as if some thick cable that has been held taut through all of these chapters, just snapped one of its wires. Its not broken yet, but I think we just saw the beginning of some fray-like action. I can't wait until we're hanging on by a thread.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

Uh-oh... spaghetti o's

Narcissa??? I thought Lucius immediately as I was reading the letter, but of course that would make sense. Narcissa's had more conversations with Brian, has more suspicions of where he's been because she hasn't seen him in her social circles. Any man with that kind of power and those kinds of pure blood mannerisms would have made himself known in society whether he wanted to or not, so the doubt over whether he was who he said he was is already in her mind.

And yeah, I didn't really think Harry would live as Brian, that would be too deceitful, also hard to maintain as Harry himself 'surfaces' quite often in the Brian persona. Although I'm thinking that there's a good possibility Draco will find that something is up with Brian sometime soon, after his mother finding out, and with him sending off inquiries to the Ministry, doubt over who Brian really is presiding in his mind. But I'm not sure if he's thinking along the right lines yet to figure Harry out.

The other thing that hit me as I was reading through this ... Brian in this story, although extremely different, takes on the look and feel of what I know as "Brian" from Queer As Folk. That's who I imagine when I think of Harry as Brian. I have no idea why, I think the name is what made the unintentional link.

Good chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Damn. That was a twist that I didn't expect. Christ, how is Harry going to get out of this one?
Great chapter
update!

Oh goodness. What is Harry going to do now that Narcissa knows that its him? And will Draco ever run into Harry on the street when he (Harry) isnt hiding his features? I think it would be interesting to see how they interact. Man I love this story and I cant wait for an update to see how in the world Harry and Draco will get together after this because Draco is definately going to be mad that he was lied to and bt the Great Harry Potter at that! Great work!

Ohh I just knew Narcissa would the first to figure it out. I love her as a character ever since I read the last book and I love how you protray her. I look forward to the meeting.

Wow. This is my new favorite fic. This is fantastic. Harry's character is fascinating-- and it's interesting how you develop it and then crack it. I expected Draco to be faster-- but, alas! His mother bet him to the punch. I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this fic!

about # 9...

don't really have much to say about this chapter, except this seemed more of a game
called 'tit-for-tat' and I think it's safe to say that what Lucius did was, HONESTLY,
stupid on his part.

Not very subtle for a former Slytherin.

Also I get the feeling Narcissa will be more of an ally for Harry & Draco, than
they'll least expect in the 'somewhat' future.

By the way, what IS your fav. genre of stories/movies?