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I really liked this chapter. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter and what harry will do in it.

It is so refreshing to see a well written Harry/Draco fanfic where the focus isn't one of them abusing the other or one of them being weak/delicate and having to be "protected" from the world. I could naturally see this as an alternate ending to the series, not just an AU where the hell did they get that character development?!? type of fic. I'm enjoying Changing of the Guard immensely and can't wait to see what this borderline empathic sex is going to do to them - I'm betting if it happens again Draco will figure out who Harry is. He's just blinded by "Brian" at the moment, but when his brain clicks on and the libido isn't overwhelming his senses I'm sure it will all fall into place quickly. He'll be pissed as all get out at first when he does figure it out, but considering that link they just shared he'll have to know that Harry has genuinely developed feelings for him. And won't THAT throw a wrench into Luscious Lucious's plans?

*breathes heavily*

Damn. That was so perfectly intense and probably some of the best of your writing that I've read. You captured the chemistry between the two perfectly, but also added that intense level of magic, and I'm thoroughly impressed :)

Whoa.. how intense..

I hope that draco finds out its harry soon, or figures it out.

and since I'm willing to put money on brian not dumping draco anymore, I'm excited to see narcissa's reaction

oh, oh... I really LOVED this chapter!!! I absolutely love the way Harry losses control to Draco =) loved this chapter, it was so HOT!

This chapter was absolutely delicious, sexy, exotic, breath-taking and exciting. You had my blood singing by the end of it. Fantastic.

Please please update soon!

Wow. Hot chapter. I don't know if I can form anything more articulate than that. THAT WAS HOT. I really like this Harry. The perfect blend of business and pleasure. Some authors write him too serious, some write him too laid back-- I am very impressed with the balance you've created in his character-- and also the very human imbalance that exists in him relying so heavily on Metamorphosis for his happiness/survival. Really looking forward to more!

True. Harry's really becoming unwind here. He's falling apart quite rapidly. Interesting to find out what the repercussions of that party will have.
update!

Wow. Intense chapter man. I love where you're taking Harry...his mask is slowly cracking for good : ) Draco taking him and leading him in the dance was SEXY as hell....how do you write a dance scene so erotically? I loved that Harry still stayed on his toes and was able to combat external distractions and potential trip-ups and turn them around on others...I hope that's foreshadowing for how he's gonna handle Narcissa and/or Lucius. I LOVE that Harry got jealous and had to go with it in spite of himself. Their game playing is at a all time high, and I think Draco is winning. At least this round : ) I LOVED the use of their magic both literally and as symbolism for Harry and Draco letting down their walls, especially Harry, giving himself, his real self over to someone for the first time as Harry. And I really really LOVE that Harry totally forgot about Brian in the heat of passion and let himself be taken. It's great that he discovered a side of himself he didn't even know about when he just let go. That sex scene was so hot, and Draco telling him thank you afterwards for really being there only confirms that he may have one up on Harry in this game. Honestly, now I'm a little worried about whether Draco will want Harry once he finds out that ultimately Harry had one over him all along. OK, enough rambling...this was a really erotic chapter, can't wait to see how this new level of intimacy impacts their interactions now....I hope Harry figures out a way to put away Brian for good while still satisfying Draco and navigating around Narcissa ::crossing fingers:::

OMG! Love it! This story is very interesting and intriguing.

So Narcissa knows the truth, what's going to happen next. I can't wait to find out!

Please update chapter 12 soon. ^_^

Jan