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for Changing of the Guard

by Lomonaaeren

person qwerty
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting deeper and deeper. Since Pansy has a Muggle lover, isn't she lying when she was talking to "Brian" and talking about how the pureblood culture is being attacked? She obviously doesn't truly care about that on the inside; she's just doing that for appearance purposes, no?
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person avihenda
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is getting really interesting!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 11

Oooh making himself into the fool is perfect way to get Narcissa to underestamate him. Love the chapter! (now on to the next chapter...sometimes it's good to be gone a few days because then I get to read more then one chapter in a sitting!)
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very intense chapter! Have I told you how much I love this story because I do! I just can't see Draco giving Harry up after that. Being pissed and upset for a while after he finds out who brian is, yes but Let him get away, no. So Draco felt what Harry was feeling and Vice versa right?
person Yume111
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I
person Yume111
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
#11
I really admire Harry for living up to just about any kind of situation. He
person Yume111
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
#12
oh
wow
I don
person LeeB
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
* panting for breath *
That was blisteringly erotic. Watching the men fall for each other has been a delight, but what's happening now is ... just incredible. Great job.
person Melony
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I was so surprised! I can't wait for the next chapter! Are you going to have them have a big fight in the end? Or is something else going to happen? XD Waiting for your chapter!
~Melony
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I just fell off my chair from cheering. Take that Aloof!Harry! See if you can keep that distance now....woot. I really believe that every step of both the show relationship and the actual relationship is going to be a battle, a slugfest of giving and taking and testing and judging. By the time that Draco discovers who he's dealing with, they will be so tangled together both realistically and publicly that it may be difficult to locate a place for his outrage. Oh, there will definitely be outrage, but Draco may have trouble learning where to put it in the cluster fuck that has become his relationship with Harry/Brian...
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex