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Loved Loved Loved this chapter! This story keeps getting better and better. I cant wait to see the interaction between Harry and Draco. I'm so glad that Draco didnt immediately fly off the handle when he found out he worked a lot of things out and I really like that. Please update as soon as possible I neeeed to see whats going to happen next. So complex its positively a maze and I loooove it.

*eyes lit up* OH MY GOD...that was SUCH a good chapter!!! Like, orgasm-good chapter, and there wasn't even any sex!!! I love love LOVE seeing inside Draco's head, and the way you did it...just AH! AMAZING! Definitely not the way I expected Draco to find out (well, honestly I had no bloody idea HOW he would find out, but sending a house-elf after him was definitely not on my "possibilities" list. But when you think about it, Harry sent Dobby and Kreacher to spy on Draco, so I suppose that payback's a bitch)

Which, actually, could be the theme for this chapter! OH MAN! Payback's gonna be a BITCH!!! And I just love how Draco turns everything hugely complicated!!! (he's SUCH a drama queen, even if he doesn't act like it in this fic) It's like Juliet (you know, from Romeo and Juliet) who creates this horribly complicated, hair-brained scheme to get what she wants...of course, that particular plan backfired on HER, and I have every confidence that even if Draco's scheme backfires, it's not going to kill him...right?

Ohhhhh, I'd LOVE an angsty suicidal-type Harry scene in which Draco rescues HIM and tells him he knows (and in my little fantasy world, 'everything's all better', but I know in reality that Harry knowing that Draco knows would probably just make Harry panic all the more...)

Oh screw it, I'm going to love it no matter WHAT you do! Keep up the good work, darlin! You rock!

Sooo need chapter 16!!!

Another great chapter. Can't wait for more

I KNEW he'd have a bitch fit. Those poor house elves are going to have such a time of fixing his room now. Hermione would be outraged. XD This story is getting so complex it is reminding me of the old movie "The Sting" where there are just layers up on layers of interwoven personalities. I'm squeeing I really am. I wish it'd been longer. Aaargh they need to snog like bunnies and take over the world. >_> (And it is "s2kitty" with a lower case s on purpose.)

squeel! loved it!

I loved the entire process of Draco

I like it.. harry is in BIG trouble .. give him hell dray..LOL

Oh, now Draco will be a force to be reckoned with. I'm looking forward to seeing the boys face off! Nice job.

what??? Oh no no no. I don't like that pensieve thing Harry's keeping locked up AT ALL! I hope he gets rid of it, or it gets destroyed. Now you're scaring me....I had a bright smile throughout most of this chapter. I was relieved that after Draco had his little temper tantrum he started rationalizing why he should make a play for Harry. I'm glad he understands how special the bond he and Harry share is....This is gonna be one mother of a mind f*ck for both of them, but I think Draco is definitely up to the challenge...I'm not so sure about Harry. As this story progresses, he starts to seem more fragile and unstable than I thought he was and definitely less than his persona Brian projects. I mean we knew that of course, but I guess until this chapter, I didn't know how much self-loathing, insecurity, and fear he was struggling with...the idea of killing yourself, which is exactly what he contemplates every time he reaches into that cupboard, to escape just being yourself is so unsettling to me. Most disturbing was that line about the mask he wears for Ron and Hermione....I had the impression that while he hid things from his best friends, he didn't necessarily consider it a separate mask, it's like even the Harry Potter he presents to him isn't really him. So then I'm left to wonder who the real Harry Potter is. Hopefully Draco can help him discover that...after much of the games are over of course. In the meantime, I'll be enjoying watching Draco go to work on him. I just hope he doesn't freak out or do something drastic before finding out someone is really willing to love him despite the mask of lies he's built for the world and himself. And boo-hoo Narcissa, that new deadline don't mean shit now, lol!! sorry, I kinda wanna watch her face get cracked when she finds out Draco is willing to love Harry as Harry and doesn't really care about losing Brian. I can't wait to see Lucius's reaction to this news....thanks for sharing the game plan with us, I think we'll need it to keep track of what's going on because this story is about to get really crazy!!! Great update!