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for Changing of the Guard

by Lomonaaeren

person qwerty
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It finally happened!!
I was wondering how long Lucius was going to hold out. He really isn't all that cool as we think... Narcissa is more Slytherin than Lucius.
Does Lucius really love Narcissa or is it a semi-fake marriage?
Man, can't wait for the Draco-Harry confrontation!
Great chapter!
update!
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...things are starting to wrap themselves up. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Mangacat
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My.. go out with a bang, eh?? Narcissa's really got her work in this time. But maybe that's just the hint Draco needs for the whole thing to turn out ok.. I can't wait!!
Cat
person s2kitty
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love Narcissa so much right now. That was just such a well written chapter - and the image of Draco flinging the potion at the Aurors in the last chapter was perfect as well. Sorry I didn't review earlier, family stuff came up. I just really enjoyed reading this at a time when things are pretty stressful.
person ghot
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your stories for a while and lurking (and I *love* this one. You're the author that writes more and quicker (with quality) that I've ever seen! Mmm, do you work with something like psychology?)... but I can't help it anymore and gotta give my opinion: Really, it seems kinda impossible to me that Harry choose a single personality, cause they're *all* him! It looks like he just decided to separate and name them and, for some reason, decided to label his weaker, faulted side as the "true Harry" (ooo, what happened?). You know, er, like we all take different fronts, or 'personas', depending on the situation and who we're dealing with? His problem seems to be that he doesn't *want* to be who he believes Harry Potter is (poor Draco, this will be a challenge)... Yeah, that's it. :P
person ghot
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait, rereading what I wrote above I realized it was a bit, um, too little to analyze such a complex character (that's why I don't usually comment O.o). So I'll just say I love this fic and am anxiously waiting for next chapter and all 30+ others! <3
person sanda
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story, I like it
person avihenda
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great read, as allways. So Draco is finaly disowned. Dose this mean that Harry will stop answering his owls and "fade away". He's finished with his contract. I'm looking forward to the rest of this fic! :)
person Yume111
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was quite impressive, both of them.
I wouldn
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I knew Narcissa would wind up being an ally...hopefully she can talk some sense into Lucius...who I'll have to admit, took a LOT longer to disown Draco than I thought he would. It makes me think that he's capable of changing his mind as well..especially after what you said in your author's note. Harry is gonna get it! I wonder what kind of wrath Draco will bring to his door for that letter. Not much to say this time around except that I hope this doesn't get much worse before it gets better...I can see it getting really bad for them before things get to the place Draco originally planned them to be...and now I'm starting to think that Draco really doesn't know his father as well as he thought he did and his plans may not turn out..I guess we'll see. It's funny because when Lucius told him he had an hour to leave, I was like Damn, this is what we've bee waiting for, but it didn't feel good you know? I think I'm feeling a bit too sympathetic for Lucius, and I don't know if that's your writing or if it's because Draco's image of him isn't measuring up to what I'm seeing...either way being disowned has become secondary or even third for Draco it seems, he has a lot bigger fish to fry. I just hope he comes out of it alive and happy for all of the shit he's put himself and his family through to get there....GREAT update, I gotta wait 3 more days? : (