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another great chapter. I loved this chapter! Hope you write the next chapter soon. Keep it up!

wow.......oh..wow....
I managed to read all 25 chapters in one ( prolonged and coffee induced) sitting. This is one of the most richly worded and visually delightful stories I've had the pleasure of reading in ages.

thanks!

Wow Last two chapters were great it's interesting to see these different sides of Harry. Draco's sure determined but then I've always imagined he was.

chpt 25. great chapter. it's like some magical version of multiple personality disorder. I'm actually disappointed in Ron & Hermione. I usually love fics where they're like "the great trio" and they always stick 2gether. but their attitude does make sense w/ this fic, so im not really complainin'

Oh wow, you've done it again! I'm so happy. I loved this chapter! Favorite line: "Some of his personas were good with words, but he wasn

This chapter was gorgeous. I always enjoy it, but here you showed so much more of Harry and Draco. The moment describing Draco's admiration and desire and intrigue in Harry's role as the entirety of Metamorphosis was just breathtaking :)

That was really really deep. I'm a bit stunned actually. I was expecting the truth, but I didn't appreciate how much inner and external struggle Harry would be going through to get it all out. You really did an excellent job with his inner dialogue and Draco's own apprehension, wonderment, and desire as a result of it. Draco really is in love, and it's so awesome that he sees the beauty in all of Harry's personas, and that he's supportive of him continuing to play out all of these identities if only he's grounded in himself. That's real love right there, especially for a character like Draco who's most noteworthy characteristics are pride and possessiveness. Of course there's still a lot of that driving his lust for Harry but it's deeper than that. Most of the really deep lines were from Draco's thoughts and dialogue. LOVED that Draco recognized all of the personas as reflections of pieces of the real Harry. I LOVED Draco's lines about wanting Harry to give him a chance to find out his faults and prove himself trustworthy. I hope Draco doesn't really think that Hermione drove Harry to this or abandoned him, it's way more complicated than that I think. And while you did give another perspective on Ron, I still feel like he owes Harry an apology and needs to get checked! Love love love Harry initiating kissing Draco as himself and the pleasure he felt as a result of it. I just really liked this chapter..it was all angsty, introspective, and intimate the way real truth-letting should be between two lovers who're working towards something deeper than just companionship and sex. You've left me in a reflective mood. Thanks for that. AWESOME update...can't wait to see what this means for Metamorphasis, Lucius and his plans, Ron & Hermione, and Harry and Draco's future together. : )))

good chapter

Sooo need chapter 26!!! Who is this voice? Does Harry have Multiple Personality Syndrone?

Harry's really opening up now... Maybe there's hope for him?
update!!