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OOOOOh the plot thickens! Great two chapters!

good chapter

That was great again.

I love how in this chapter, as well as in the previous, it

I can't believe this story is still getting better! The first part of it was an intriguing game of cat and mouse on a level I've never read in fan fiction between two people attracted to each other trying to win at their own game but now, this has morphed into a real psychological, social justice, and romance drama..it's like all three. And I'm loving Harry's war with his merciless voice or what I've come to know as the real Harry Potter. I agree with Draco, Harry's become too Slytherin for his own good. I LOVE Draco's thought: "I wonder if another of my tasks might be coaxing the Gryffindor side of him back to life". I was cheering when I read that part! Not only does it recognize that the beauty and talent of what Harry's managed to accomplish because of how it exemplifies character traits he holds dear but he loves Harry enough to take on the difficult task of rebuilding his original self, a person who's traits were very much not like the ones he usually admires. And it's true, where is the Gryffindor part of Harry....Hermione is gonna kick his ass when she finds out how he used her for information. He's making a lot of assumptions based on the reactions he sees from Ron and Hermione BUT he is partly to blame for their continued ignorance. He hasn't challenged their beliefs or their views and so they will go on being ignorant, which of course justifies his rationalization to keep lying to them. It's a cycle really and I hope he comes to see what role he plays in that. Of course, Ron should be held accountable for his bigotry and in this story I've come to loathe him and frankly I don't see how he can be redeemed unless he does a total 180. I wonder who this insider is who has suddenly gone tight lipped...I have no idea and I feel like I should..I hate that. And the rumours about Harry Potter being involved..were they put out there by Harry? I didn't know they had enacted that part of their plan yet, I thought that they were just discussing doing that. If it wasn't Harry who put that information out there, then I suspect that Narcissa has had a change of heart and is getting involved. I would love that. I can't wait to see Ron's face cracked and on the floor when he finds out Harry is shagging Draco and even better, he's in love with him. OK, rambling now...LOVED this update. You never disappoint : )

A tease! You're a bloody tease!
heh
It would make sense for Lucius to be the informant, no? Argh, I want to know!!
Why is Harry under suspicion? (well rumored to have been there but still...) I though Harry covered his tracks with changing his magical signature. Narcissa wouldn't have told the Ministry that Brain is Harry b/c she's loves Draco too much, and Lucius doesn't know that Brain is really Harry... right?
Too many questions... but that's why I love this story so much... it keeps me on my toes!
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OMG!!! This can't Happen to Draco!!! This is fucking Lucius fault, can't he just leave his son do what he pleases now that he's no longer his heir?!?!

Gods, please update chapter 27 soon ^_^

Jan

ARGH! Lucius will never give up, will he? That was such an evil cliffhanger! Well, I supposed since Harry is going to the Ministry to talk to Ron anyway, Ron will undoubtedly will excited and blabbed about the Ministry bringing down "the gay son-of-a-Death-Eater". Isn't Draco's apartment supposed to be a secret or did Lucius already knew about it's existence?
Great chapter!
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Oh, no!!!! Serious business here!!! I absolutely LOVE your story!!! Keep up this excellent writing!!! I can't wait for more... Well, I guess I can sense I have to! lol... Anyway, I look forward to the next update!!!
~dani

sorry I haven't reviewed , I have been too busy just reading franticly, You had updated 10 times since I last checked on this story. Made my day, AND made me late for work! I just love this one, so many delicious complications and quirks, this is just like I like em.

You are evil. That was a horrible cliff hanger. Draco can't go to jail. ;_;