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for Changing of the Guard

by Lomonaaeren

person Sol
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, like always! I'm so waiting for the next chapter!! Please have mercy one me!:D Also, if I may, would you please please milk the Ron/Hermione versus Harry/Draco confrontation when they finally learn the truth(or at least part of the truth even if all is never revealed)? It would be so good, I'd love to see Harry put Ron in his rightful place.
person Koneko
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you HAVE to keep going with this. I absolutely adore it and I need to know what happens. <3333333 Koneko
person Yume111
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great as always.

Are you going to go into what happened during the year Harry mentioned? Did something occur that went so deep that Harry decided he didn
person Mangacat
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's endearing really, how Harry skits around the confession that it IS actually his own voice talking all the cues ... I think it's Harrys only real genuine voice in a way that all the others are not. they're part of of him sure, but not his innermost personality!
Cat
person hakkyou
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god what for a mean cliffhanger T_____T You're so mean! Please update in the next 10 minutes!!! xDDDDD otherwise you're responsible for my heartattack!

I really love this story, your Harry & Draco charas are ecxellent written.
person Jan
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! How does he suspects Harry's involve?

Could it be all the times that Draco keep calling him Harry instead of Brian?
Is Harry going to find out that Draco's been arrested? If so, is he going to come to Draco's rescue as Brian?

Please update chapter 28 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not dwelling on or not dealing with? I don't like that Harry is placing mental barriers around memories that obviously effect who he is today (all of the people he happens to be) and much of his actions, especially if these suppressed memories are indeed the reason he formed Metamorphosis, whose name has taken on many different meanings for me. Well done with that! I worry about that boy and the facade he puts on for everyone around him, at least Draco's getting through... or so I like to believe. And at least an ally came out of Draco's arrest, but argh, I find the antiquated ideals of much of the Ministry and the wizarding world in general so indescribably infuriating as you have captured the somewhat prevalent bigotry flawlessly.

I truly enjoy Hermione's character in this and am glad we've gotten a chance to see more of her and I do hope that Harry asks for her help. While she is not outright 'supportive,' she does seem to care for Harry and while that concern only seems to further alienate Harry's true personality from her, it's there and that's much better than Ron's character. I am truly beginning to despise him, his reactions to homosexuality are so incredibly inappropriate and I don't mean simply because it's idiotic. His 'best friend' is gay! Clearly Ron does not care about Harry at all, they're not 'friends,' they're not even acquaintances at this point. No one would overtly show their derision towards something a friend or an acquaintance happened to be a part of. Harry needs to sever ties with Ron and hopefully with Draco at his side he will be able to do just that. I love your Hermione but I cannot believe that she is dating such a pig!

Well, fantastic update, as usual! Thank you for sharing and I hope you'll grace us with more soon!
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco is in a bit deep it seems, so its a good thing that Harry's cut and run plan on the rebellion situation got turned
away by a sudden epidemic of honesty, or he would have had an incarcerated ex Malfoy on his hands. I really am finding
in myself a dislike for Ron and Hermione in this story, not really a dislike for them as people, but more for the willfull
blindness they seem determined to showcase.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 28!!! Why do they think Harry is involved? And why ask Draco?
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo....post more! You can't leave it like that!

Gah. Writers. *throws hands in air and walks away*