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Hehe I love the personas, I wish I could do that ^_^
I can't wait for more!
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good chapter

Soooo need chapter 29! Sooo Kingsley isn't fooled by Harry's show of weakness. Interesting.

Ron is the type of friend you could never count on.

Oh Harry, you silly goose, how many times am I gonna want you to bust some heads on Ron when he says something slow, only to have you calmly
accept it and make me believe that you did the best thing. Arg. I do find myself really liking Horace Longbottom, quite a lot actually, and
I find it deeply disturbing how much I stopped thinking of him as Harry in those moments, even as Draco had trouble thinking of him as Harry
and kept referring to him as Longbottom. There are so many layers left to dig through until Draco actually gets to the bottom of everything
he needs to understand about 'Harry', that it may feel like the deception never ends. I do like that Draco just stopped underestimating
Harry's ability to act, completely. Its about time he got those last lingering doubts about Harry's powers of deception out of the way before
they got him into some larger trouble.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

ah you're evil to leave it like that!

Wow, I hope Shacklebot didn't see Blaise kiss Draco cause then he'd use that outdated law again. I love that Harry has disguised himself as a Longbottom and Draco didn't even know it was him, then his reaction when he found out... I half expected him to jump Harry right there! Kind of a cliffie ending, but that is what keeps me coming back for more. :D

Well.. the confusion theme is one of the most endearing of the story and after you brought in a new star player, now, I'm sure it's going to get to new heights *g* I can't believe what you did to get Draco out of this situation, but it's barely ingenius!! And I like Horace, hopefully he gets another appearance. Also the scene with Ron was very crucial I think for the development of consciousness in Harry wanting to be free of obligated deceptions. Well, we'll see how that turns out!!
Cat

Another cliffhanger... you're getting way too good at those m'dear.
Can't wait to see the interaction between Horace/Harry and Blaise. Will Draco try to flirt with Blaise? Wasn't Blaise with someone before? Why is he kissing Draco like that in such a public place?
You would think that the Minister would want to check to see the validity of someone who was writing to him often. But I supposed he's too busy to look up the genealogy of the Longbottoms. Or too easily fooled, as seen in this chapter.
Great chapter!
UPDATE!

Whoa! Zabini is kissing on Draco like a lover? Were they? I smell trouble and another pawn in the game of love for Draco.lol. I totally understand Draco's apprehension, I mean how do you trust someone like Harry, that will be the test of whether he really loves him. And even if he does love him at what point is it healthy for him to work through this, and at what point is it best to set limits and walk away? I wanted Harry to smack Ron silly...I hope that's coming..or some version of it. It was genius how Harry rescued him as Longbottom, although I was disappointed he didn't go as Harry...I guess he's still not ready ::sigh:: I can't wait to see who the insider is..and perhaps the threat of a former lover will push Harry out of the closet completey? : ) Ughh... 3 more days?