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Sooo need chapter 31!!

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Does Ron play a large part in Harry

#29
Now that

Oh this was marvellous!! I can't begin to phantom then ingeniuity of the whole plot. But I'm slowly muddling through the whole mess alongside Draco who really doesn't get it yet, but is getting there. Well, on with then next chapter!
Cat

good chapter

Sooo need chapter 30!!! Some of his words? Who is he?

Awesome, awesome, awesome! I think thats all that I can say! I love your story and I get excited
every time I check my email and there is a message from you saying you updated!!! Thanks! I am
glad that Draco is starting to see how bad it is for Harry to get so into his personas... I
look forward to more soon!!! Keep up the fantastic writing!!!
~dani

They say that you should be careful when waking sleepwalkers, because if you do it too suddenly or you scare them too badly, they can
resort to violence. I do not know if Harry will turn to violence, but a cornered heart is one that does not react healthily. I applaud
Draco's drive to finally understand the territory he's working in, but if his shovel digs too deep in the wrong area, and Harry feels
too threatened, there's no telling what could happen, not to mention, the tome of different people that Harry could hide in. If he chose
to try,I do believe Harry could go where Draco couldn't find him, and never leave London. It is a dangerous thing to not be able to recognize
someone so close to his heart. And Harry is so very much sleepwalking.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

Yes! Harry and his merciless voice for once were one....that was the real Harry talking...and Yay for Draco for taking this challenge head on and forcing Harry to face what he's doing. I LOVED Draco's lines in this chapter. they were pointed, sexy at times, and for once he laid all his cards out on the table. I'm glad he had to admit to himself that he had to be truthful with Harry if he ever expected to teach Harry to be the same. And how ironic is it that Draco's ex lover shows up but Draco winds up being the jealous one...of lovers that haven't even come into Harry's world yet. That was great! Harry did scare me a bit when he totally disappeared after recognizing his own jealousy. It's like he really vanished, and I don't really recall seeing that in this fic, even when he was Brian, he seemed conscious of being so, kind of like a dual consciousness. But as Longbottom in Diagon Alley he was really scary...I can see why Draco was freaked out. I can't wait to see how this unfolds and if Harry will keep merging with his merciless voice until he doesn't even recognize it as such anymore...I'd love for him to use that voice on his friends! And why was this conversation so sexy to me? Maybe it's Possessive!Draco that turns me on, but it got me just as excited as Draco, who by the way seems to be easily aroused by Harry, even when he's pissed, which is awesome. So what happened to Blaise? Is he coming back, will Harry's secret be revealed to him eventually? does he still have feelings for Draco? I guess we need to start the revolution now....I'm anxious to see where Lucius still stands on this issue, if things have changed and where Narcissa stands now as well. GREAT update : )

That was a crazy chapter. I'm glad that Draco is making progress with Harry. I see the very present hint of what happened to Harry in his 19th year... I so want to know! But I do like the slow build up that you're doing. Your way doesn't destroy the integrity of the story.
Great writing!
update!