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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely! I enjoyed it lots! Like always! I look forward to more soon!
~dani
~dani
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #30...
The merciless voice chuckled in his head like a dragon catching a thief in its hoard.
-was that a 'Hobbit' reference?
oh, and at an attempt to be funny, Harry & the merciless voice should
have their own little side story. It TRULY has a lot to say doesn't it? :-)
As a matter of fact, that should be the title 'Harry Potter and the Merciless
Voice'!!! It's a Great Read!!!
Okay, I'll stop... :-)
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ANYway, about the chapter, Horace Longbottom was brilliant and a wee
bit frightening to watch Harry do. I was starting to feel like Draco, good
Lord Harry was a bit TOO immersed, but I saw the reasoning for it. Didn't
make it less disconcerting, BUT I saw Harry's side AND I saw Draco's
point, of course the bit on Harry NOT sleeping with clients, when Harry is in
disguise, was a little possessiveness on Draco's part.
By the way, you wrote something in this chapter that triggered an idea, I don't know if you thought about this yet, but have you EVER considered doing
a new persona for Harry, where he was imitating Draco's movement &
speech?
Because I get the feeling that's what Harry does, watch people and adapt their
way of talking and moving as his own.
Did you mention something like that once?
The merciless voice chuckled in his head like a dragon catching a thief in its hoard.
-was that a 'Hobbit' reference?
oh, and at an attempt to be funny, Harry & the merciless voice should
have their own little side story. It TRULY has a lot to say doesn't it? :-)
As a matter of fact, that should be the title 'Harry Potter and the Merciless
Voice'!!! It's a Great Read!!!
Okay, I'll stop... :-)
*********
ANYway, about the chapter, Horace Longbottom was brilliant and a wee
bit frightening to watch Harry do. I was starting to feel like Draco, good
Lord Harry was a bit TOO immersed, but I saw the reasoning for it. Didn't
make it less disconcerting, BUT I saw Harry's side AND I saw Draco's
point, of course the bit on Harry NOT sleeping with clients, when Harry is in
disguise, was a little possessiveness on Draco's part.
By the way, you wrote something in this chapter that triggered an idea, I don't know if you thought about this yet, but have you EVER considered doing
a new persona for Harry, where he was imitating Draco's movement &
speech?
Because I get the feeling that's what Harry does, watch people and adapt their
way of talking and moving as his own.
Did you mention something like that once?
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Harry knew he had personas who would fit the occasion."
That line made me absolutely stop, and go back and reread the section a couple times. Your language is so subtle sometimes, but it's just perfect to describe the personas as a 'who' not 'that.' That line defines Harry so completely that I kinda fell in love with your writing all over again.
That line made me absolutely stop, and go back and reread the section a couple times. Your language is so subtle sometimes, but it's just perfect to describe the personas as a 'who' not 'that.' That line defines Harry so completely that I kinda fell in love with your writing all over again.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.. you're not really nice to Pansy, all this worrying will have her get grey hair prematurely!! But Blaise under the Silencing Charm, cute.. I can't wait for the next one!!
Cat
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more! I absolutely can not wait to see what they do next!
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I jumped out of my chair and clapped at this passage: That was true, Harry admitted reluctantly to himself. And there was a part of him that really did want to show off his personas to Draco, to see Draco looking at him with fascination and awe. What else did he have that could keep Draco
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction between Blaise and Draco. It's very playful.
Do you think that Pansy gave in a little too easily?
Great chapter!
update!
Do you think that Pansy gave in a little too easily?
Great chapter!
update!
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find it encouraging that Harry still has moments where he automatically responds as himself, and not a persona. That is a good sign if
there are signs for this sort of situation. I think that Blaise's presence will add some much needed ooomph to Harry's endeavors to come out
of the Metamorphosis closet, so to speak. Despite the fact that Zabini's overtures of love to Draco are just a long running game, the
jealousy that they will more than likely encite in Harry will be a motivator to be more open with him. I really do like Harry's personas,
and strangely enough, for that I feel guilty.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
there are signs for this sort of situation. I think that Blaise's presence will add some much needed ooomph to Harry's endeavors to come out
of the Metamorphosis closet, so to speak. Despite the fact that Zabini's overtures of love to Draco are just a long running game, the
jealousy that they will more than likely encite in Harry will be a motivator to be more open with him. I really do like Harry's personas,
and strangely enough, for that I feel guilty.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!! look at what i missed when i was away...damn moving..lol but im back now and the last few chapters were wonderful...cant wait for the next update!