rate_review Reviews

yay! another chapter! :-) Thanks

about #36...

Of ALL the things I imagined, I never imagined a conflict where 'non-violent'
violence would be used.

Personally, I liked how Harry handeled the Aurors, because of the simple fact,
I thought it was going to get ugly AND personally, I think I've gotten kind of
tired of the age-old, free-for-all conflicts between protagonists & antagonists.
[Hope those were spelled right...]

That is for the time being, blame it on reading TOO much fanfiction with TOO many
similarites.

Now, I KNOW for a fact, Lucius was using a non-verbal spell, that sneaky, tricky
snake!!! Man, I can't wait until you tell us what it does!

Oh, by the way, let there be dancing. :-)


PS- no love triangles, huh? Darn... :-/ I'll think of something else.

It's odd that Ron can still be this blind when his best friend is gay.... Where's Hermione in all of this?
This chapter was crazy good. As soon as Harry Apparated off, I knew Lucius' gestures were signals to the rest of the groups.
Awesome writing!
update!

Draco unfortunately hasn't gotten deep enough in there to completely notice when a different version of Harry comes in to play,
but we can definitely hope that he'll catch the signals soon. As much as I love Harry's ability to be his own population, it will become
both an emotional block and a step against the rebellion, if Draco discovers he's lying to him. It will create distrust inside of their camp,
and if Draco and Harry aren't unified, then it will be hard for anyone else to turn to them for guidance.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

forget about the chapter [35]...I GOT AN IDEA!!! :-D

Something in this chapter triggered an idea I haven't seen you do yet.

Have you ever thought about doing a story where someone DID come
between Harry & Draco and was a threat against their relationship???

I bet you haven't!!! *cackles wildly* HAHAHAHAHA!!!!


..oh, and I suppose you want a comment on this chapter. :-]

Woot! Old School Harry! How I have missed you. Where did you go? Why did you forsake us. Oh well, the point is that now, you're
reemerging, and many things are going to be shinier in your presence. What makes me most happy though, is the fun and awesome image of Draco
Malfoy dancing his black little heart out all alone in the middle of the dance floor. It delights me in a very secret, happy little way.
Oh Draco, you social butterfly you. Unfortunate side note, I still find Nusante an asshole, but maybe I just am a hard judge. He's got sense,
but he also has a slightly misplaced sense of self-righteousness...
Send him to me for therapy...we'll work on it...
Anywhoo...
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

I figured that was the case with the way the plot transitioned into the bigger plot. Can't wait to see Lucius's reaction to Harry's statement. I'm glad he's finding himself again.

Nusante is so frustrating, but I think his reaction is part of the reason I tend to enjoy your writing very much. You write flaws extremely well, rather than portraying *any* character as an idealistic symbol, which is how Nusante views Harry. That contrast is really beautiful and enhances your writing so much.

Also, I loved the moment when Draco saw Harry. The idea of dressing for weakness as Harry is so apparent through this story, for those moments when he must be himself, but the shift in his mentality and Draco's way of voicing his thoughts was perfect :)

Ack! Lucius just showed up! Where is he getting his info from??
Great chapter. Loved the emotion.
update!

I'm still full on in with Draco on Nusantes ass.. but we've got more pressing issues at the moment, what with Lucius standing there and how he'll react to Harry's inquiry!! But finally Harry's found something to like about himself, so no hiding and lowering anymore!!
Cat