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Very nice exchange ... I really liked the traps Harry laid out for all the attackers!! And MAN were you mean to Lucius!!
Keep going!!
Cat

nice chapters! im interested in seeing how herm. acts seeing as shes muggle born...

hmmm, I'm not really seeing where this is going at the moment. Lucius sounds like he's in denial land and so does Ron. Nusante is probably the one selling them out as everything started after he arrived. I just feel like he's suspicius.
great chapter!

OOh... i have a REALLY bad feeling that Lucius put some kind of curse on Draco... Something to make him marry that girl or/and want to abandon Harry... I just hope that they'll discover it soon and it won't bring poor Harry any sorrow...

I was reading the other day that civil unions are like Jim Crow segregation for gays: treat people differently for their sexual orientation and give them a separate set of right. I had never heard that argument before.

When I read what has brought the separate motivations of Nusante, Draco, and Harry together to fight the criminalization of gays, I have to smile at your story. You offer several different viewpoints within the continuum of thought. It's very, very interesting.

Good job.

I love the chapter title.
I loved the entire chapter too, and I enjoyed it up to the moment that Ron arrived. After that... well it was painful.

I was afraid a "relapse" would happen sooner or later, but it was still very very disturbing to see it.
Have we arrived at the core of Harry

I loved the 'attacks' against everyone trying to disrupt the whole event - the pictures and the embarrassment that occurred first were perfect, and I couldn't help but giggle at Harry's second attack.

As a thought, I love watching the play-by-play between Draco and his family and friends, as I have throughout this entire story. You take the mindset that is so uniquely Slytherin and make it so convincingly ingrained in the characters. It absolutely fascinates me to see that quality in the mind games and strategies employed by them. I'm always pleasantly surprised because it's completely against the way I operate :)

Ok I've been lurking for a while and decided I should say thanks for writing this, and for keeping up on the updates. I'm really enjoying this. The characters seem real, and have murky motivations. Keep it up!

Well the encounter between Harry and Lucius was unxepected, but interesting to say the least. The counter attacks against the breach were amusing, but the encounter with Ron was a bit saddening. Well, we shall see how Harry fixes this one. He's gonna need characteristics from all of his persona to solve this problem. I always believed that the persona were a part of Harry's real self, as much as he might not want to admit it, and they might have been "separate" from him in the beginning, but they are a very much a part of the person he is now, and if he ever comes to term with that, that's be nice, if not, well it's your story, you manipulate the plot how ever you want. Great chapter, I await the next one with anticipation.

Ron annoys me but at the same time I kinda feel for him.

ANother awesome chapter I love teh detail and work you have put into your world, its incredible.