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Could I possibly be added to the update list?
Its an amazing original Idea, and I can't wait to find
I love this story and haven't been able to stopped reading it. Amazing writing, plot, and your own way you write/made the characters. I am anxious to read the next Chapter. Please update soon!

AHH! My computer spazzed out on me for the last review XP

Anyways...
I can't wait to find out if Draco will come and save Harry, or if something bad will happen. On the edge of my seat excited okay. And for some reason my email is guarded so I'm putting it up here, So if you can you can email me with the update on the next chapter? :)

dsighn.emagn@gmail.com

Thanks!

I agree in part with Hermione about Harry being sick. It just isn't healthy that he has all those different people in his head, and not just that, but that he also actually believes in them. However, I don't really like how she's just going to blow his secret to St. Mungo's like that. that's just not what a really good friend would do no matter how much she professes to care for him.

I feel really bad for Ron. He's really taking it hard- poor guy. I also feel really bad for Harry. I hope he's okay. from the way you ended the chapter and the urgency and madness I felt from it- I really thought the guy was losing it and about to slit his wrists or something. (hope that doesn't happen)

anyways great chapter. im just like randomnly commenting to whichever ones inspire me. lol. keep up the good work and words.

*sigh*...I think it's a damn shame when you review 2 stories by the same author
and can't remember a damn thing you said about each story. I was going to comment
about 'MWM'...

About uhh..#37?

I think Harry has FINALLY started tettering on the razor's edge. I had a feeling
this was the direction you were going in, because you gave subtle hints about 5 [?]
chapters back.

In a way, I can see Harry using certain personas/personalities for different
situations, but if he was/is a person of sound mind & body, it shouldn't effect
who he is as a WHOLE. I would see it as him being him, only difference is..he gave
each characteristic of himself a different name, i.e. Brian and Elizabeth.

BUT, if he was troubled TO BEGIN WITH, then I would agree with Hermione, he IS
starting to develop a mental instability that needs to be dealt with...soon.

But, you never gave an indication he had such a problem, only a survivor's guilt
which IS common for those who fight in wars.

...and that makes me want to mention that MAYBE Harry needs to talk to an older
veteran who HAS been in a war before and had to witness this past one with
Voldermort. Maybe they could give Harry something to think about?

Other than that, for Harry, who had the intelligence to put together a business AND
create personas to cater to individual needs, to go in this direction makes me
want to ask, where is this coming from?

Where is this insecurity coming from? Because the Harry you created thus far, with
enough magic to whoop ass blind-folded, seemed too strong to let himself get lost
in the personas he plays and it DEFINITELY can't be from him being gay.

If ANYbody has a problem it's Homophobic Ron and ''Up-in-all-your-business'' Hermione.

....and those were just questions that sprung out from reading this chapter. :-)

Sooo need chapter 38!!! I'm worried now! Hermione just did some major damage with her threat!

Oh sh*t... you've got to be kidding me.

Soooo need chapter 37!!!

Going away on vacation has it's downfalls, one of them is not having time to read my favorite story, but a perk is having two chapters to review when I got back...@35. I'm so excited to see this party getting under way. I'm a bit worried that Harry still hasn't heard from Ron and Hermione...what does that mean? I guess I'll find out...well, hopefully. I'm glad he's figuring out that he's made enough concessions in his relationship with him and isn't gonna go over there to beg. I felt sorry that Harry had to answer all of that mail, but I guess there are responsibilities that comes with the role of being the real Harry Potter that he'll just have to learn to deal with again. It may even be good for him, grounding him even further in his identity. Love that Harry found dress robes that were different from Brian's but yet still just as striking and flattering. It only confirms that that part of Brian was very much Harry, and I hope like Draco, that he gets used to highlighting his inner and outer beauty. He doesn't have to flaunt it, but he doesn't have to hide and pretend it doesn't exist, being Draco's man will be really great for him in that way along with so many others. I'm trying not to hate Nusante, but I swear the man is just a little self-absorbed and I don't have a lot of patience for unempathetic people. I like how Harry handled him though...LOL@Harry's little whisper to Lucius...I can't wait to see what he's gonna do, I mean, what can he do..he's outnumbered. I hope I'm not speaking too soon. The best part of this chapter was the last line....it's about freakin' time and I'm so happy for him for getting to this point. AWESOME update...now on to the next chapter. : )))

Oh no....NOT liking this deception at all...LOL@myself when Harry summon this Gerald persona, I was like who the fuck is Gerald and what business is this of his! I had to re-read the persona's introduction to find out if it was a separate person and I was SO disappointed to see that it was a Harry persona. Which is funny because when he reached into himself and pulled out Brian I was cheering! But Harry is fooling himself if he thinks Gerald is just a bodyguard persona, Gerald sounds more like the weak scared self loathing Harry Potter to me. Lying by omission is still a lie and there must have been another way to handle this...I hope this doesn't come back and bite Harry in the ass as far as his relationship with Draco is concerned. Ron is an idiot in this fic and I honestly want his face to be cracked. I can't believe Hermione gave him that spell to do on him. I LOVED all of the defensive spells Harry used in this chapter. You're brilliant, and this is just another reminder of how creative and detailed you are when re-creating the Potterverse...a lot of this stuff is better than canon, so kudos to you for that. BTW, when you write powerful!Harry, it's so damn sexy....love love love Harry when he's doing this thing!I can't wait to see the naked Aurors on the front page of the Prophet, let's see how they try to explain that...and those quills writing down all of their 'deviant behaviors/dreams' is gonna be hard to explain.lol. This confrontation or as Harry calls it "atonement" is gonna be nasty, and I'm not expecting it to end well, I'll be surprised if it does. He only has to atone to himself and NO ONE else...the deception was wrong yes, but Ron and Hermione should understand that he had to contend with social forces and rejection because of who he was, and they really didn't do anything to make coming out and being himself easier. I hope he holds his ground, apologize for deception and not who he was and WHY he did what he did. GREAT update...I'm both fearful and hopeful for the next.