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about #38 & 39...

Damn! I'm gone for a little bit and you turn Harry Potter into freakin'
Sybil! *tsk* Just don't have him speaking in different voices, then I'll
have to personally call for an exorcist. :-)

..oh wait, he HAS spoken in different voices!!! :-o

But, I'm glad you had Draco come through for him.

I would have gotten a tad nervous to see him slip into a place he couldn't
escape from. Plus, I'm glad to see him get one over on Hermione.

That's all. *walks off humming Ghetto Boys song, ''Minds Playing Tricks on Me''*

this story is funny when it needs to be touche!

Nice story! Like how you combined multiple personality disorder with the gay rights agenda. I do sometimes wonder why Draco loves Harry so unconditionally though. I know you've said that he sees them as a perfect match but,why? Harry is really screwed up and I like how you let it play out, with some resolution in this last chapter. His business idea is brilliant and plausible. I find myself getting a little lost between dialogue and thought and you are head hopping quite a bit which is a big no,no, but all in all you write beautifully. Maybe do double spacing on your Word doc,make it easier to read? Now I'm just being a nag! Great story! Keep it up! Interested to see what Lucius is going to do. One question..Did Lucius have these extra marital affairs,keeping a male lover in the closet, like he expects Draco to do? Lastly, I'm glad you made this about love because I do have gay male friends who do have a lot of risky sex with multiple partners and do not take precautions(I'm in the travel business so all of my friends just about are gay males) one of which died of Aids (WAS MY BOSS) and frankly, while I'm not one of those women that is homophobic, I am one of those "just not in my face," people self-admittedly. Your story has made me reexamine that attitude, and for that reason this story is really an uplifting tale for gay and nongay. Be proud of yourself! I write Dramione but this is the first slash story I've read that actually piqued my interest. Awesome work!!

it's allways fun to read your chapters :-) Great twist!

Simply heartwarming. *heart*

very good chapter, so hopefully now everything with harry and his "friends" is worked out and we can move on to finding out whats gonna happen with the rebelion

Ok.. so now with Draco there we're over this little bout of madness and wanting to annihilate ourselves to be able to face the music. I wonder if he will continue Metamorphosis in England, but I think so.. there's just the feeling that this isn't the last obstacle on the way.. well, we've GOT over ten more chapters to go, eh? I can't wait!!
Cat

YES!!! Last line is perfection! He is there, he's ready...bring on the rebellion baby! LOVED this chapter for so many reasons. I like how you showed how the little things in someone's life can have a cumulative effect and impact their functioning, outlook and disposition in general. I'm so sorry Harry had such a weight to bear, and no one seemed to be there to help him through it because those burdens seemed so small and they were basically invisible until it snowballed out of control. I hope Hermione considers both Harry's and Draco's words and comes to reason and bring Ron to do so also...although I have little hope for him. Draco is such a kickass boyfriend, everyone needs someone like that in their life. I love that Harry finally made love to him as Harry, no tricks, and it was beautiful in its imperfection. GREAT writing there. Well...I'm psyched about the fight to come, bring it on baby. AWESOME update as usual.

Sorry, I just had to comment on Yume's last comment. When he said "And the knowledge of being someone of worth, of immense worth, rises like a sun, lighting up his entire being.
And he won

It feels like, in a deranged, not really, kind of way, I'm watching a story about The Hulk. Maybe I'm influenced by the release of the movie,
but I have some qualifiers. Harry's ability is something that he can't change, though his isn't as dangerous, and he doesn't actually want
to get rid of it, it scares the people around him, and the ones he tells about it, save perhaps Draco, want to make it stop. He has a huge
confrontation with most of the important people in his life and then, when the sun comes up on the next day, he's still using it, but now,
he's using it as a tool for Harry, instead of a cover for Harry. He's learned to control the portrayal of his abilities. I know I didn't say ]
alot today, but the story is at a happy place (kinda) right now, and we all know that happiness needs much less comment than despair.

Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex