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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story concept with Hermione masterbating and the Weasleys getting down and then coming together as well as the blur of dreams and reality that is implied. :)
I think the story should have been longer and the action more developed and described with more detail though. For example, I'm not really into m/m story but with the Weasleys there I think could have been more passion there with descriprions of how they felt pleasure. Same with Bill and Charlie.
As for Hermione using her magic wand; hello! It's a magic wand so has all kinds of potential as a toy, no? Maybe it can be warm, be wet, vibrate or move on its own, shange size or shape.. Mmmm..need I say more? ;)
The dialogue was ok and I think it's cool that Hermione's Fantasies has something for different tastes; m/m, m/f, f-solo. I think a story that has that would be best if it were a litle longer in each of those areas so that someone could get into the area that turns them on and be able to read the other areas for entertainment and contunuity as they wish.
I definately look forward to reading more stories from Angela. :)
I think the story should have been longer and the action more developed and described with more detail though. For example, I'm not really into m/m story but with the Weasleys there I think could have been more passion there with descriprions of how they felt pleasure. Same with Bill and Charlie.
As for Hermione using her magic wand; hello! It's a magic wand so has all kinds of potential as a toy, no? Maybe it can be warm, be wet, vibrate or move on its own, shange size or shape.. Mmmm..need I say more? ;)
The dialogue was ok and I think it's cool that Hermione's Fantasies has something for different tastes; m/m, m/f, f-solo. I think a story that has that would be best if it were a litle longer in each of those areas so that someone could get into the area that turns them on and be able to read the other areas for entertainment and contunuity as they wish.
I definately look forward to reading more stories from Angela. :)
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are u gonna update?
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, it is a good story and could you include Harry and Ron. Put nasty kinks. You say before dirty and nasty is same thing, if it is same thing, then you would put any kind that is include sex and from within body. Ginny is include, 4 somes, surpise to other when they do it, to Hermione, that is she get surprise. When I say nasty, not just frontal play, but back play too.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot .. please please more .. later for now
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH. My. Bloody Hell! How the hell did you write that without giving in and succumbing to your own orgasmic bliss?!?
That was fucking HOT! Please, please, please say you'll write more.
Still desperately waiting(and re-reading) for an update to The Lying Slutty Little Runt!
That was fucking HOT! Please, please, please say you'll write more.
Still desperately waiting(and re-reading) for an update to The Lying Slutty Little Runt!
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is very HOTTTT!!! I like it please update soon.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, yummy, yummy, yummy. I'll try to read more carefully later and give a slightly more useful review.