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for Ron's Secret *COMPLETE*

by Adolf

schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You get a A for effort alone...this was so disturbing and funny and sad I don't know what to say..i'm speechless...lol. Hedwig and Ron is like the strangest pairing I've ever seen in FF yet....still pretty well written all the same..lol. OMG. I feel so dirty...
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BWHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAHA AAAAAHHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHA BWAHAHAHHAHAHhheheheheheheeeeeeee


Ron's a fucking psycho. =^^= I love how in the end the owl just exploded. Massive yuckness factor. hehehehe. Overall, an excellent tale of pure dementia and fucked up desecration of a beloved text. Good job.
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is really well written, I have to say you captured Ron's love for the bird and I am looking forward to your other plans. LOL I couldn't help but laugh the whole way though just from the conviction and your ability to describe in detail what happened to Hedwig. Good job!
person Kari
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good stoay, it was really some thing different. Besides that i dont know what to say.
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok.. now this story isn't even making sense any more. I can only suspend my disbelief so far. lol. Its still disgustingly hilarious, but I mean, c'mon.



Yeah. Harry's blind as a bat without his glasses. All Ron needs to do is accidentally bump in to Harry and knock of his glasses, mysteriously "losing" them in the process, and I'm sure Harry won't notice a thing.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
((O_O))


OH. MY. GOD.


This hilarious and horrifying all at the same time. I dare say this is the single most depraved thing I have ever read. ^^ Keep up the good work. (I think?) lol
person ..
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
like wow this is the best story i have read (haha)